Open Poetry #30 |
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Beneath the Surface |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines ![]() |
Beneath the Surface Somewhere beyond here, death is waiting, as I try to starve its appearance remaining speechless, allowing the thoughts to travel as far as my clenched lips that prevent the cold's chapping from tearful words. Beneath the surface I have been brushed by a warmth, an invitation not met, caught up in cliches of another world where Winter has come and settled in. Its wall of distortion standing before me, blocking me, ending it before it ever had a chance to begin. I let the shadows whisper to me, their pretense guiding me to that place where spirits come alive and feelings are reborn. I live in the house that dreams built, random thoughts beneath the surface... waiting for the gift of you. M "beneath the surface" inspired by LP "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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Brad Majors![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
well done ! |
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EvocativeVerse2 Senior Member
since 2003-09-10
Posts 1279 |
Woohoo naked one. Love this. Darn you did well. Wonderful piece here my friend. Enjoyed it so very much but...pssst...I am kind of jealous I did not write it! (Wink!) Seriously...well done. Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history! |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
extraordinary write...very much enjoyed! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
well now this...this I like! Finally! a poem where the shadows are good! |
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Nightshade![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Very nice Maureen. hugs, Chris ![]() "At the touch of love everyone becomes a poet." |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
LIke this...james |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
great poetry - you say so much so well - loved it - Paul |
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vandana![]()
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice write ![]() |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
nakdthoughts, that prevent the cold's chapping from tearful words. a real visual... Enjoyed the write. sadelite |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Maureen, I can hear your heart pounding so many miles away~ Please know I will always be here for you, if you needed me. Love you, M~ |
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