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Zero flight.. |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow 
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Today reeks of time, stained by relentless ghosts. The impure illusion in which we follow, like a star set in motion.. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I've missed reading you. Seems I have some catching up to do. Good morning, Meghan. [This message has been edited by Sunshine (12-15-2003 08:48 AM).] |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Good one...oh how we tend to follow the wrong stars sometime...and yet, perhaps they are the course we were meant to take? Smiles and hugs...good Morning |
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pandonov Member
since 2003-10-03
Posts 478b/w conscience and insolence |
 true |
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EvocativeVerse2 Senior Member
since 2003-09-10
Posts 1279 |
Oh my god. This is simply the best of the best that I have read this morning. Bravo! I wish I had written this...but since I did not I will just have to be content having read it. Bravo! Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
oh Meg...sadly true |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Meg - As long as that star you are following isn't Balladeer or Toerag, you won't have to worry about too many impurities - lol. Nicely written poem, Meg, with some really deep thoughts intertwined in it. I enjoyed it very much. |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
"Today reeks of time, stained by relentless ghosts" Wow! Powerful! |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Oh do I wish I'd thought of this! ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Hi!, so great to read you again. Enjoyed. Maree fate is not just |
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mytuesdaywishes Member
since 2003-09-05
Posts 254a voice from the musicbox |
"Today reeks of time" hell yeah it does joy has its own justice. and dreams are languid and lawless. and everything bows to beauty, when it's fierce and when it's flawless... |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
time can be a web trapping all that tries to pass, even truth. ...a superb poetic snapshot. Thank you for sharing it. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
yes, we've missed you too good seeing you back and your poetry  as always enjoyed |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Words with magic. Dave |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
I like it...lots...glad I found it..  K |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Hi Meg! Just wanted you to know I am still reading and enjoying...  "if you won't let me fall for you |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Hi Meghan  A lot was said in a few in this one. I enjoyed.  Hugs  Ethel |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Like a star set in motion!!!! Loved this Kaoru~ |
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