Open Poetry #30 |
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Keth Junior Member
since 2003-11-10
Posts 14 |
It's only me Scars and dreams Lit by moonlight Buried in footsteps Behind me It's only time Past ends now Now never ends Forgotten in moments Behind me It's only life Oblivion awaits me Stroking me patiently Sleeping in words Behind me. |
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satin water passion Junior Member
since 2003-12-14
Posts 12Following the moon |
This poem has a nice feeling to it. It gives me a picture of a young person frustratedly running away, trying to escape his/her own thoughts. peace Andrew |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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