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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart 
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Slowly as I walk into the ocean, the waves crash over me, My spirit, my body, my love, all will be set free, When the sun sets on the sea, I hope you will remember me, Little fish and mermaid fair, long black silken hair, The sun will continue to shine, poets will write poetry with rhyme, My memory will forever live in your heart, Tears flow from eyes, a soul torn apart, Know my heart will forever love you, always see me in your eyes so blue, Remember me....remember me... my last breath.....breathed only for you.. (This poem is written about the death of a poets muse, and when the death of writing comes,you feel dead inside and can longer write) |
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Brad Majors 
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
beautiful piece! |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
Very nice....applause and smiles..... _____ice ><> |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
NIce writing...even Ernest Hemingway knew this frustration at times...James |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Yes, this is a feeling that I think all writers feel at one time or another. You wrote of it well.  Happy Holidays,  Ethel |
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