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inkedgoddess
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0 posted 2003-12-14 10:27 PM



across the starkness
of distant colds
two winter trees stand

empty   barren   aching
of what their day holds

branches reaching
climbing high
scarred and scraped

starving   fruitless   grieving
to an endless sky


extending like fingertips
briefly touching
grasping blindly
the darkness

finding   connecting   dreaming
these hearts of wood

sleeping     embracing
love if they could


thru hibernations long slumber
silent and still

awakening on a late March morn
bearing gifts of their calling

the soft scented
blossoms
of endless will

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Enchantress
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Canada eh.
1 posted 2003-12-14 10:35 PM


Beautiful blending of words by two of Passions finest!
Please du-et again.
~Hugs to you both~

~Let peace begin with me...    

ThisDiamond
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2 posted 2003-12-14 11:12 PM


Enjoy your duets very much you guys.

You weave in gold, solo and together.

TD

passing shadows
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displaced
3 posted 2003-12-15 04:02 AM


damn

beautiful

bklynboy
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4 posted 2003-12-21 08:38 AM


Well done!
inkedgoddess
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5 posted 2003-12-21 11:21 AM


thanks for bringing this up again, it was nice working with craig once again
PassionandFun
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6 posted 2004-01-06 12:19 PM


very nice!
Margherita
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7 posted 2004-01-06 09:09 AM


Had not seen this before, but this is just a beauty!
Hearts of wood, wow, I am deeply touched.
Bravo, both.
Love, Margherita

LngJhnAg
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8 posted 2004-01-06 09:13 AM


This is really beautiful imagery, Goddess.  You've laid it all out so very well.
inkedgoddess
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9 posted 2004-01-06 12:13 PM


thanks
and of course thanks for craig writing with me, a joint effort, and a shared pleasure

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10 posted 2004-01-06 06:01 PM


This is just GORGEOUS~
Wonderfully woven duet~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
         noles1@totcon.com

xaos
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11 posted 2004-01-06 06:46 PM


A beautiful craft
alan6501
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12 posted 2004-01-06 06:50 PM


across the starkness
of distant colds

This is definitely my favorite line/part.
The phrase 'distant colds' particularly. It just brings on such a neat image in my head. I have to agree, this poem is georgeous. You have a way of putting descriptive words together to form a united mosaic that all ocmes together in the end.

inkedgoddess
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Ohio
13 posted 2004-01-06 10:36 PM


craig, my friend,
where are u , get in here and take a bow

ctowen
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Green Mountains of VT
14 posted 2004-01-10 02:18 PM


Better late than never I suppose ... he,he

   Thank you everyone for your words of praise and the time to write with Igoddess once again.

passing shadows
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displaced
15 posted 2004-01-10 02:32 PM


glad this came back
DavePage
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16 posted 2004-01-10 03:44 PM


Quality vision, quality words

Quality

Dave

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