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inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

0 posted 2003-12-14 10:27 PM

across the starkness
of distant colds
two winter trees stand

empty   barren   aching
of what their day holds

branches reaching
climbing high
scarred and scraped

starving   fruitless   grieving
to an endless sky

extending like fingertips
briefly touching
grasping blindly
the darkness

finding   connecting   dreaming
these hearts of wood

sleeping     embracing
love if they could

thru hibernations long slumber
silent and still

awakening on a late March morn
bearing gifts of their calling

the soft scented
blossoms
of endless will

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

1 posted 2003-12-14 10:35 PM

Beautiful blending of words by two of Passions finest!
Please du-et again.

~Hugs to you both~

~Let peace begin with me...

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

2 posted 2003-12-14 11:12 PM

Enjoy your duets very much you guys.

You weave in gold, solo and together.

TD

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2003-12-15 04:02 AM

damn

beautiful

bklynboy
Senior Member

since 2002-12-15

Posts 660
florida

4 posted 2003-12-21 08:38 AM

Well done!

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

5 posted 2003-12-21 11:21 AM

thanks for bringing this up again, it was nice working with craig once again

PassionandFun
Member

since 2003-07-30

Posts 60

6 posted 2004-01-06 12:19 PM

very nice!

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

7 posted 2004-01-06 09:09 AM

Had not seen this before, but this is just a beauty!
Hearts of wood, wow, I am deeply touched.
Bravo, both.
Love, Margherita

LngJhnAg
Member Elite

since 1999-07-23

Posts 3508
Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion

8 posted 2004-01-06 09:13 AM

This is really beautiful imagery, Goddess. You've laid it all out so very well.

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

9 posted 2004-01-06 12:13 PM

thanks
and of course thanks for craig writing with me, a joint effort, and a shared pleasure

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

10 posted 2004-01-06 06:01 PM

This is just GORGEOUS~
Wonderfully woven duet~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
[email protected]

xaos
Junior Member

since 2004-01-05

Posts 35

11 posted 2004-01-06 06:46 PM

A beautiful craft

alan6501
Member

since 2004-01-03

Posts 89
PA

12 posted 2004-01-06 06:50 PM

across the starkness
of distant colds

This is definitely my favorite line/part.
The phrase 'distant colds' particularly. It just brings on such a neat image in my head. I have to agree, this poem is georgeous. You have a way of putting descriptive words together to form a united mosaic that all ocmes together in the end.

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

13 posted 2004-01-06 10:36 PM

craig, my friend,
where are u , get in here and take a bow

ctowen
Member Elite

since 2001-10-18

Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

14 posted 2004-01-10 02:18 PM

Better late than never I suppose ... he,he

Thank you everyone for your words of praise and the time to write with Igoddess once again.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

15 posted 2004-01-10 02:32 PM

glad this came back

DavePage
Member Elite

since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

16 posted 2004-01-10 03:44 PM

Quality vision, quality words

Quality

Dave

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