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Winter: Season Opener
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Winter: Season Opener |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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Winter: Season Opener I call out his name and all that echoes me is distance and it is way too cold tonight |
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Estel Junior Member
since 2003-12-10
Posts 22 |
This is a great opening to the holiday season. These things often start in a way that is best expressed with the fewest words, and you did just that. Great poem!  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Yes!! Perfect Helen...I know this feeling... Hugs~ ~Let peace begin with me... |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Excellent! "A spring shower was cause to run |
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James_A_Fraser Senior Member
since 2003-09-03
Posts 972Out Making Anticlines |
One way or the other, and whether we know it or not...we usually create our own distances. I hope yours grows less. |
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S Arthur Grey Senior Member
since 2001-03-19
Posts 719woven by a poet's loom |
The eiders are out of summer hibernation, have spread wings to the cold. Their wrapped feathers are close and warm, but they are only feathers. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
yep, way too darn cold |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Helen, it's cold here, too........ |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
I can feel that breeze... |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
you say volumes in a few words and evoke feelings that are powerful - Paul |
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