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Destiny |
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jaicie114 Senior Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 750On the edge of forever |
The softness of your soul stokes the fire inside my breast… The flame grows brighter As I surrender to the desire of touching you… Just one more time. Of feeling your heart tap out the rhythm of my destiny… Of sensing your Light fill every tiny crevice of my being… Of reaching for that which I cannot have. Yet, knowing… It was mine all along. This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Well done. TD |
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Fire Fairy Junior Member
since 2003-10-22
Posts 43Australia |
Jaicie... so beautifully romantic! I could taste every one of your sweet words. The lay out of the poem was perfect for the words too... almost like falling... Thank you beautiful girl for sharing such a stunning piece. |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
yes...a very romantic, beautiful write. |
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jaicie114 Senior Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 750On the edge of forever |
TD, Fire, steaven... Thank you so much for your nice comments. I truly appreciate them. Love and Light...jc This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
a very passionate write...I enjoy you |
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jaicie114 Senior Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 750On the edge of forever |
Thank you, passing... I'm always thrilled when you reply to my work. Love and Light...jc This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light. |
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