Open Poetry #30 |
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A Secret Merry Christmas (to a Most Beautiful Person) |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
Googly eyed Ugly Man, How have you made it In the chill so long With gawking stares And averting eyes And thinking no one cares. You always remember each And everyone's special day, And comment pre-reviewed With just a sentence or two, (using words well thought through). You’re a such kind, gentle soul. Googly eyed, Ugly Man It could happen to us, you know At any time in life. I wonder if we’d be as smart To think not of ourselves But of the other guy. Though I don't take time to look very close, It’s still your eyes I see. I.Q. is not in mind, but soul, and that, Sir, through gentleness, your beauty and intelligence overwhelmingly show. a secret Merry Christmas and best wishes to continue your kind thoughts . I care, Jeanine [This message has been edited by Sadelite (12-15-2003 06:31 AM).] |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
this is precious...just heart warming |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
passing shadows, Thank you for your feedback. I was just about ready to delete this because I thought it might be too bold. It is about an old man who lived with us as I grew up. He is not as fortunate in appearance as the vast majority, but he has a heart of gold. Sadelite |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Merry Christmas to you, too. Are you going to give him the poem?????? |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sadelite Very sweet look at the interior of a person, not what is on the outside. Lovely tribute! |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
iliana, No. It is a secret merry Christmas poem. Sadelite Martie, Thank you for you kind words. Sadelite |
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Ratleader![]()
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
I knew that guy...wondered what the special thing was that he had and I seemed to lack...then learned it was humanity. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Antonio_L Member
since 2003-12-01
Posts 110NorthEast USA |
All the sweeter for being secret Sadelite. I loved it because a very nice lady wrote it, and you wrote it so well. Tony. ![]() |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
very nice gift for your friend and a bump back to the top for you. Merry Christmas. |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
Ratleader, Antonio, and Gentle Spirit, Thank you for your comments. I appreciated them a lot. Happy holidays to you. Sadelite |
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