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Can You Hear
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Can You Hear |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Can You Hear The bells of heaven toll in vain For all the souls were lost in pain Each flight of egos light and burn Winging o’er the lamp of learn The use of force in salad toss Have burnt the fields to charred remorse And poisoned elements of endure With the venom of false allure Chaos lifts a hydras head That doubles if one cut, to dead And feeds upon the grit and grime Forever in the soul of time The quick that lifted me to light Has turned the wick to dead of night And I am lost in catacombs Of times forever pile of bones. I fly upon a butterfly The shape of which, good God is why. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
A timely write, considering the news. Well done, Sy...  |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
The quick that lifted me to light Has turned the wick to dead of night And I am lost in catacombs Of times forever pile of bones. know the feeling... wonder what it feels like to fly upon a butterfly Good Morning, Sy. M |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
The use of force in salad toss Have burnt the fields to charred remorse And poisoned elements of endure With the venom of false allure Chaos lifts a hydras head That doubles if one cut, to dead And feeds upon the grit and grime Forever in the soul of time The quick that lifted me to light Has turned the wick to dead of night And I am lost in catacombs Of times forever pile of bones. ==================================== when I read those couplets I just wanna shout you are so cool!!! (Nope moth...thats not good enough) YOU are so COOL!!! (there-thats better)  The use of force in salad toss Have burnt the fields to charred remorse ------ Chaos lifts a hydras head That doubles if one cut, to dead YOU ROCK and it rolls me ... Need I say anymore? *ww*   |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Good morning, Mr. T. ~ Oh, yes! I can hear! But I was saddened to hear what I heard! "The quick that lifted me to light Has turned the wick to dead of night And I am lost in catacombs Of times forever pile of bones." ~ That will never do, no sireeebob! You get that wick of yours back into the light and the live of day! I may not be a butterfly, but I do have wings!  Hop aboard my back and we'll head off into the beautiful light of day and out of the dark catacombs!Loves, 'n hugs, 'n angel kisses, EA |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
A most powerful and profound write, Sy. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh my Sy! Such a powerful write!! And timely what with this morning's news! Tea's ready! ~Morning hugs, Nancy~ ~Let peace begin with me... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine Thank you for the well done. Hugs Maureen, Try it, it feels good. Hugs JM, What you do and how you said Gives my Randy a dizzy head And that is not the full of say It last me well throughout the day WWRS Earth Angel, I'll take dubs on the ride, one never knows when one will need one. Hugs scorpio, Thank you my friend. Nancy, Thank you sweet, wouldn't want to miss my tea and sympathy. Hugs |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Wonderful words dear Seymour. I am late again, but I have cherry tarts to go with afternoon tea! hugs, Chris "At the touch of love everyone becomes a poet." |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
Seymour, You leave me speechless. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
that is sort of sad and dark Seymour...you ok? the last lines were good  You're good at endings. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Chris, Always a delight to have tea with you. Sadelite You are kind. passing, I alwys run hot and cold, not to worry. |
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