Open Poetry #30 |
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Velvet |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace ![]() |
Velvet velvet is my grain my heart is such that it can not be bartered nor is it complacent I do admit it is demanding wanting all or nothing it was not my heart that before betrayed me yet a free will that let me accept so little giving so much in return and there were times it has been I have cocooned myself in ache of stretch of wing wanting this pleated fabric turned loose free to fly on breath but let silk cords crush deeper than surfaces creasing beyond to start over yet again so here it lingers again impatiently heavy waiting for tips of light fingerprints to hold it in courageous grace and in acceptant strength scratching so clearly a name on sweet layers of velvet |
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Mysteria![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Incredibly strong writing Helen, and to be honest, this is why I am still single again to this day. Loved this one, felt the "heart" in it. Merry Christmas to you! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
bittersweet, sigh you do that well |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
Intriguing, your poetry often has made me think of velvet. Thank you for posting this. My mind is more clear now. ![]() |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Beautiful Helen. Eric |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
you take us inside the heart of it all - paul |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Wonderful writing Helen...beautiful! Hugs~ ~Let peace begin with me... |
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Jason Lyle Senior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438With my darkling |
Great write, I love reading you. Jason |
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vandana![]()
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice write ![]() |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Hi Helen, I knew from the title that this would be extraordinary .... and I was right. Merry Christmas .... hugs, Marti 'You cannot shake hands with a clenched fist.' |
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