Open Poetry #30 |
I gave you my heart... |
Master Senior Member
since 1999-08-18
Posts 1867Boston, MA |
I gave you my heart; you took away my innocence... I asked for something in return and you responded, "enough." It was my voice that tagged the walls of the pyramids searching for the passageway to the eternity of your love. If my words mean nothing to you, disregard this, but somewhere in Africa, where the land is fruitless and dry, the tribesmen will recite my poetry to their goddess, and the clouds will rumble with a thunderous cry... Check out my poetry here: http://www.unknownpoets.com/db/authors/master [This message has been edited by Master (11-25-2003 12:56 AM).] |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
well done |
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J. K. Mitchell Member
since 2002-01-12
Posts 311GA |
Nice... |
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Hockeychick19 Member
since 2002-10-29
Posts 430Massachusetts, USA |
Wow... Nicely done. ~Kelly~ Life is a gift so live it to the fullest! |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I like this very much... it's good to read your work again! *S* |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
wow! this was an amazingly brilliant write...few leave me speechless but i believe you have! take care, amy "love is like a butterfly-- |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Master~ Such a poignant penning~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
damn...that's good |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
masterful...James |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
A veryyyyy well written poem... Enjoyed this a whole bunch... Bumpity Bump this thread should be back2the top... Smiles2uPoetFriendMaster *~coco~* |
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