Open Poetry #30 |
a simple black bag |
Snow
since 2000-10-16
Posts 1170desert flower looking for rain |
a simple black bag spinning out of time running in place how the earth does take it's toll with the role and the punches create your own devices of happiness and swear to the gods that nothing has ever been as bad or as good as this one moment in time and fall where the lilies wept at the sound of a shadow crossing a line the lines we drew in the sand around two names where i love you was a tattoo of black and gold stripes and the moon how it laughed pressingclose to each breath gave flight to the belief in hope and they shook loose the stars till the glow in the sky came from their hearts but tonight like the stars in a black duffle bag sits a head holding thoughts that tomorrow will stay the same or worse fall prey to change but one things for sure in the shadow that falls is no quiet understanding of the love you once found in a simple black bag snow©2003 "...why does my skeleton pursue me if my soul has fallen away?" ~p.neruda [This message has been edited by Snow (12-15-2003 02:11 AM).] |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Gads girl.....this is amazing.....and yes simple, written between the words....hugssssss lady Lauren~ ~~**~~**~~**~~**~~ |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
What an amazing talent you have! This is wonderful! Hugs~ ~Let peace begin with me... [This message has been edited by Enchantress (12-13-2003 12:52 PM).] |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
too many favorite lines to pick out... creating devices of happiness...yeah, don't we wow, this write is going into my library! |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
snow, intricately woven. excellent piece. |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
a simple back bag or black bag?..my guess is you mean the latter...nicely woven indeed |
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