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My Life Part 1
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My Life Part 1 |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
I know I share alot of personal things, but it's not for pity or for attention.It's for the strength of my healing and especially lately it seems as if that's where my writes are coming from.So if it's sad for you, don't read it because it's not my intention to make you sad, but just to share with you who I am. One day I was brought into this world My parents thought I was a precious little girl As the years seemed to pass on It seemed as if something had gone wrong For my parents would fight day after day And argue in the most terrible way Then the day came, when my father left And didn't look back, not even a regret My mom tried to raise us the best that she could But so many times she never understood From such a young age, I had to be grown And learn all of the things, I was expected to know I raised my two brothers as if they were my own I took care of the schoolwork, the clothes, and the home Then there were the men that came into my mother's life Causing so many problems and so many strifes She didn't know how I laid in my room each night Trying so hard, the tears it seemed I couldn't fight I became a woman at the age of eight My heart filled with so much anger and so much hate My childhood thrown out the backdoor For I didn't need it, I had so much to care for My brother's became my life to live for Because it seemed as if there were nothing more Crystal |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
very heart felt feelings expressed, perhaps writing them will help in the healing of past,, my thoughts of you are within,, |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) Oh Crystal, I'm so sorry you had to go through all this pain no one should deserve to go through sweet friend, I know deep down with all my heart your brothers are blessed to have you as their loving sister and forever they will love you! (wipes tears) We are all sooooooo proud of you, sweet friend, you have come a long way and despite the tears, you have become a most loving and caring woman that comforts many hearts, God Bless You, we all love you so much, you deserve extra special angel hugs for this write! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Crystal, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
from adversity... comes strength... the story not so different than many on here..or many you meet everyday.. but it is what we learn to do with the adversity that makes us different... seems you embraced the resonsibilities and now matter how much it might have and may still be a source of pain for you.. continued to live the way you thought life should be.. nicely done... |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Your life is reason enough to live as it is very specific and defined...there is great purpose in your being you, the lives you will touch, but most of all the journey you decide to chose.... This poem was very good, please keep writing |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
angelblueyes - keep writing it, as it helps to get it out. I've done it, so I know it works, it may take a little time, but it works... BC |
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GypsyGirl Junior Member
since 2003-09-21
Posts 29 |
Just keep writing it out. It does help. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
As you rise above the pain and sorrows, The sun will shine on your tomorrows. You have gained in strength and wisdom from all of your trials. Each day is a new page on which to write new experiences!  Love & healing Light, Linda |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Crystal, this really touched me. Yes, it made me sad that a precious child had to go through these pains that no child should ever have to go through........but also, I rejoice that you came through these trials and tribulations with such a positive and compassionate outlook on life. Crystal, it's so hard to understand the why of certain circumstances in life. I do know, though, that when we've been through things, we have greater compassion for those around us who are going through similar situations. Thank you, sweet friend, for sharing your heart with us. I know that it takes a lot to write of such personal happenings in our lives. But, when we do, it does help. Heart hugs to you, sweet lady  Ethel |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Such a long, long sadness in this....hurts to read, but everyone should read it. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
QJQ:Thank you my friend. Noah:Thank you sweet friend. I've risen above so much and know that I will continue on.My hope is that those who thinks it's useless can see this and realize it's not.Cpat:Thank you my friend.We've all risen and we will all continue to rise. LeeJ:I will always write for if not I might lose my sanity. BC:I will my friend. Crystal |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
GypsyGirl:Thank you my friend. EA: Thank you sweet friend. Ethel: thank you sweet friend, your comment means alot to me. Ratleader:Thank you friend. Crystal |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
a wonderfully sad but powerful poem - Paul |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
Goodknight:Thank you, it brought me much ehaling. Crystal |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you for sharing this angel...James |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I totally understand why you write and I am here to thank you for sharing |
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