Open Poetry #29 |
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Silence |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace ![]() |
Silence you have become my poetry and in your silence I am without words "wish your room had room for two" John Mayer |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Amen Helen! |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Amen indeed! Keeping it. Maree ![]() fate is not just |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Ooooooh...love this, Helen... ![]() When the power of love overcomes the |
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alisa Member
since 2003-08-20
Posts 70Florida |
wonderful... |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
... and such words speak V O L U M E S !!! ![]() |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Oh this is so true , it the same as saying " I am lost without you " Hope |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
And in a few words, you have said volumes, Helen...very nicely done...very gentle smile |
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Finalinsomnia New Member
since 2003-10-07
Posts 8Washington, USA |
Short and Sweet. |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
![]() Love, Terri~ ![]() Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer! |
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Ratleader![]()
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
But silence can be utterly eloquent...as we short-line poets know so well.... ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Helen...So true and beautifully said! |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() (smiles) Oh Helen, this is beautiful, sweet friend, silence can be a pretty thing sometimes and when crystal tears fall is one moment! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing! ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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suthern![]() ![]()
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Yes... and you wrote it perfectly. *S* |
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allamericanjoe Member
since 2003-10-02
Posts 116Iredell county, NC |
very sweet, and deep. "The greatest gift a father can give to his daughter is to love her mother." |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
Beautiful. ![]() Crystal |
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KoKo Senior Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 995Inside the shadow's shadow |
Saving this! |
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Jason Lyle Senior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438With my darkling |
Hear the silence so loud. nice write. Jason |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Love your style Helen, enough said! |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Some of the most tender things can be said without saying anything at all... Sometimes... words just get in the way... Magical Helen! |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
Yet you say so much in so few words. |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
mind if I save this!? ![]() If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. |
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