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n2dmystic
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since 2003-09-27

Posts 253
beyond the doors of perception

0 posted 2003-10-04 04:59 PM

I had intended this to be my last poem on this topic, but I couldn't let go. see "Mere Rhetoric"

I want to send you poems…
Of love and light and laughter
And then after…
when I’m done…
you’ll come back on the run

But I’ll still send you gems I find…
Works of love and grace
From the soul’s and minds of those…
whom I think know God’s face

Because I must write about my pain
Work this crap out ‘til I gain…
what?, I don’t know
But when I find it…
It will know me, own me, show me…
Peace, for once and all time

Peace, Joe
in the big MT
seeking the serendipitous magical mysteries of life's ubiquitous twisteries

[This message has been edited by n2dmystic (10-04-2003 05:00 PM).]

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

1 posted 2003-10-04 05:31 PM

very deeply honest, enjoyed reading

shara
Member

since 2002-05-21

Posts 69
florida/USA

2 posted 2003-10-07 06:23 PM

i can totally relate to the way you feel, hurts like hellm all you wanna do is forget it ever happened, writing somtimes helps.
thanks for the great read, be blessed and keep writing.

sha~sha

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

3 posted 2003-10-09 12:00 PM

Because I must write about my pain
Work this crap out ‘til I gain…
what?, I don’t know

Very nice, honest write!

Peace Joe~

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

4 posted 2003-10-09 12:03 PM

honest..and well presented...

nice job!!!

allamericanjoe
Member

since 2003-10-02

Posts 116
Iredell county, NC

5 posted 2003-10-09 12:07 PM

I can relate to this. I don't know what I hope to gain from writing poems. Especially those that are not read by the person for whom they are written. Perhaps it's a search for understanding of my own feelings? I don't know, anyhoo, wonderful poem. Mucho gusto!

"The secret of life is enjoying the passage of time" ~James taylor~

Endlessecho
Member

since 2003-09-05

Posts 398
I live within myself

6 posted 2003-10-09 12:32 PM

very real and raw. Well expressed!

dertah
Senior Member

since 2003-06-18

Posts 584

7 posted 2003-10-09 01:02 PM

if only she would come back running.

HopeS
Member Elite

since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

8 posted 2003-10-09 01:15 PM

I think the hardest part is letting go
by writing hopefully the pain will outwardly flow

Hope

n2dmystic
Member

since 2003-09-27

Posts 253
beyond the doors of perception

9 posted 2003-10-12 10:53 AM

you guys are so cool to respond to the content, and affirm me for the emotional content. thank you all.

Peace, Joe
in the big MT
seeking the serendipitous magical mysteries of life's ubiquitous twisteries

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