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vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

0 posted 2003-10-04 12:43 PM

I linger on and on
Till the dawn
Till love drift slowly
To the seasons
changes into a memory
Linger away
to the song
whisper words
In the wind
In my mind
I shall drift away
to the love
That a faith found love
Become only a memory
Linger on and on
To the moment
Linger every page
turns linger slowly
every book burns
Linger your memory
On my mind
Linger

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

1 posted 2003-10-04 12:51 PM

Lovely vandana...nicely written.
~Hugs~

~Autumn, the year's last, loveliest smile~

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2003-10-04 01:20 PM

kind of sad...but I like this

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

3 posted 2003-10-04 02:44 PM

Vandana
Beautiful bittersweet

I shall drift away
to the love

reminded me of a sullen lullaby
but with a dose of the voice of
an angel . . .
*smile*
xxoo

James_A_Fraser
Senior Member

since 2003-09-03

Posts 972
Out Making Anticlines

4 posted 2003-10-04 03:24 PM

Drift, linger... beautiful thoughts, and a beautiful song sung with them.

~~J

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

5 posted 2003-10-04 03:25 PM

(smiles) Oh Vandana, this is pretty, sweet friend, may loves sweetness always linger deep in your heart and forever rock back and forth softly, yay, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Vandana, thank you for sharing!