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Barbara
Junior Member

since 2003-01-24

Posts 32

0 posted 2003-10-04 06:53 AM

What is wrong with you?
Why do you lie?
You`re lying to your BEST friend,
and you lie to Me!
We didn`t do to you anything!!
You took my heart with kindness
that was made, not real.
You told me things,
beautiful things,
just like in a movie...
You gave your hand in the back pocket
of my jeans
and walked with me...
I still feel soft kissing,
down in the town on a lonely bench...
We were so happy,
just looking in a night sky...

Butt things were getting bad..
you didnt cal or hold my hand..
you ignored me and I was the last thing,
you would think of..

I was scared and sad,
like never before.
I was so cold and lonely that I was trembling..
I regret I ever fell for your lies!

And its been a month,
sence you left me...
but everything still reminds me of you..
and Im so angry,
you know?
You lie, you try to make me look bad,
and I didnt say anything bad to you.
So what the hell is wrong with you?
and you left me!
So what do you want?!
And you found another girl!
So why do you still try to put me down?!
WHY?!

And if I regret EVERYTHING we had,
I dont regret one thing: I dont regret
that I met one very good friend,
that was supposed to be your best friend,
but you dont treat him like that.
You try to put him away from me!

So Hes the onlyone I will fight
for with all my mad and sad heat!
And I will show him the truth!
Cause you`re not worth anything!

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2003-10-04 07:01 AM

Poetry is one way to get out your feelings,
and you did a good job. Welcome to
Passions! Please, check your E-mail for a
Special Greeting!

Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen?

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

2 posted 2003-10-04 09:36 AM

Oh my!!! If this is from personal feelings
you're having, I sure do hope that things
get better soon. This sounds really hurtful.
Hugs to you, and welcome to Passions In Poetry.

Ethel

icebox
Member Elite

since 2003-05-03

Posts 4383
in the shadows

3 posted 2003-10-04 01:05 PM

You write outrage and despair well. Sometimes it is only anger that awakens a young muse. You have talent; in time it may turn to softer emotions and awayf rom the bitter gall of heartbreak.

Welcome to PiP! Enjoy.

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

4 posted 2003-10-04 03:29 PM

(big hugggssssssss) Oh Barbara, I can feel the anger and betrayal so deep in this powerful debut, sweet friend, it's people like that I pity so very deeply and shame on people like him who denied you, God Bless You! I send angel hugs your way, sweet friend, this is excellent! Welcome to Passions, sweet Barbara, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your heartfelt poetry, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barbara, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

n2dmystic
Member

since 2003-09-27

Posts 253
beyond the doors of perception

5 posted 2003-10-04 03:35 PM

yeah barbara, the more you write about it, the further you'll get from it. WELCOME!!! to Passions. a good write. thank you

Peace, Joe
in the big MT
seeking the serendipitous magical mysteries of life's ubiquitous twisteries

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