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Fallen Redemption
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Fallen Redemption |
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Ku'uipo Junior Member
since 2003-09-25
Posts 42 |
Sometimes i fall in love in a way that is without reason, without wisdom, Loving blindly, Without knowing, Trusting to an extreme that ought not to be, Failing to see the truth, Allowing myself to be intoxicated by the romance, Indulging it, Allowing it to creep into the crevices of deep dark enamor, I desire fidelity, the capacity to salvage my pride, Return me back to innocence, And bring redemtion to my side. |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
At times we look to forget the world and fall into the arms of love or the so pretence, to live with regret would be much worse; to have let a moment of romance go by and the dream of what could be should never be considered. Our time here is so short, our regrets too many, our happiness too short. Congratulations on taking the chance towards happiness, even if it does not work out. Don't sort redemption, but the moment and the life of happiness, what is done is done. Take care my friend, enjoying your words. Sincerely Rick |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Sometimes what we think is love, or what we feel, isn't shared by the other person. That's when the heartache comes in. You expressed this very well.  Hugs  Ethel |
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