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James_A_Fraser
Senior Member

since 2003-09-03

Posts 972
Out Making Anticlines

0 posted 2003-10-04 12:55 PM

you flow over me
like a tide
across the flats;

and I am helplessly
blessed, awash
in sudden beauty,
welling over with
your vibrant life,
my gray enmeshed
in a sparkling chaos
of color and tone
that swirls down
through sunlit
waves of you and
I rejoice, rejoice

even as
the world calls,
and

ebb begins....

[This message has been edited by James_A_Fraser (10-04-2003 10:43 AM).]

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

1 posted 2003-10-04 01:02 AM

This is just lovely, James.
I truly enjoyed the read.
Hugs,
~Vicky
When the power of love overcomes the
love of power the world will know peace.
-Jimi Hendrix

Miah
Senior Member

since 2002-08-26

Posts 1062
Pennsylvania

2 posted 2003-10-04 01:03 AM

Very beautiful. Loved the way your words flow.

quote:
Always drink upstream from the herd.

Will Rogers

n2dmystic
Member

since 2003-09-27

Posts 253
beyond the doors of perception

3 posted 2003-10-04 02:22 AM

yeah man! that's what I'm talkin' 'bout. Also, this is a very beautiful love poem James. thank you

Peace, Joe
in the big MT
seeking the serendipitous magical mysteries of life's ubiquitous twisteries

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

4 posted 2003-10-04 10:52 AM

Jamie...Such beautiful words of love!

icebox
Member Elite

since 2003-05-03

Posts 4383
in the shadows

5 posted 2003-10-04 11:03 AM

Ahhh...that was nice, like a cool drink on a dry day. Thank you.

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

6 posted 2003-10-07 09:08 PM

I knew I'd find some poem so beautiful it would be worth the days of waiting for PIP's resurrection... this is it. *S*

If only that ebb could be stayed... but perhaps knowing the tides bless for only a while keeps us appreciative of the blessings. *S* Wonderful work, sir! *S*

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

7 posted 2003-10-08 08:08 AM

oh how beautiful, gives me joy to read, thank you

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

8 posted 2003-10-08 08:25 AM

I was pulled into the swirling ebb and flow of your eloquent words...

EA

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

9 posted 2003-10-08 09:44 AM

By the way... with one thing and another, I missed saying "Happy Anniversary" on the correct day... but let me remedy that with a late wish... For you've added much to these blue pages in the past month... and you also mentioned a series of books I've greatly enjoyed! *S* My ignored chores don't thank you... but I do!!! *S*

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