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sometimes it's okay
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sometimes it's okay |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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stories looking tall again built upon another's floor sheath of steel and hard concrete a tower on the mountain scores an "A" in visability... stories voices small again brace the strain another floor atlas is too weak in knees and Neptune waters at the eyes... stories they connect the dot in the myth of history and future that we all forgot... tempered beam and cinderblock and tinted glass to block the sun watching us pour river's run breeding plants in love of dark. I love this and I love the way the notes of stone hollow the home into my bones in lingering-- sometimes emptiness can sing Sometimes it's okay. |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
"stories they connect the dot in the myth of history and future that we all forgot..." Good Morning Karen! Loved those lines.. Susan |
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Miah Senior Member
since 2002-08-26
Posts 1062Pennsylvania |
"I love this and I love the way the notes of stone hollow the home into my bones in lingering-- sometimes emptiness" Wow very good. Always drink upstream from the herd. |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
"stories they connect the dot in the myth of history and future that we all forgot... tempered beam and cinderblock and tinted glass to block the sun watching us pour river's run breeding plants in love of dark. I love this and I love the way the notes of stone hollow the home into my bones in lingering-- sometimes emptiness can sing Sometimes it's okay." Yes...sometimes...smile... Love this, Karen... Love YOU...  When the power of love overcomes the |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
I love this and I love the way the notes of stone hollow the home into my bones in lingering-- sometimes emptiness can sing Sometimes it's okay. And I love your writing, sweet Karen.  Hugs to you Ethel |
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n2dmystic Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 253beyond the doors of perception |
"stories voices small again brace the strain another floor atlas is too weak in knees and Neptune waters at the eyes..." wow! that is so lyrical. very nice. thank you Peace, Joe |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
As one who chuckles at the myths of history, I salute you. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
serenity Sometimes you freek me out.  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Yes...sometimes it's okay. Love ya lady! ~Hugs~ ~Autumn, the year's last, loveliest smile~ |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
tempered beam and cinderblock and tinted glass to block the sun watching us pour river's run breeding plants in love of dark. I love this and I love the way the notes of stone hollow the home into my bones in lingering-- sometimes emptiness can sing Sometimes it's okay. ========================= its is when you write it baby. love the way you linger.   "Nature's first green is gold, |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
it's ALWAYS ok. I need to keep this And the angel said unto me, "These are the cries of the carrots, the cries of the carrots!" |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
My thoughts exactly, some times it IS OK really? K *smile* xxoo |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Oh Karen, this is wonderful, sweet friend, you always make it sound okay and there is never reason to be ashamed for having it sometimes, as that only develops who we are much more! (kiss on cheek) This is so wonderfully spoken, sweet friend, we al love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karen, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
are you sure...btw...I had a dream about you lastnight...I don't remember tell me please!? lol...something about go ahead tell him "thank you" yeah I'm crazy... If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
yes....sometimes it is ok. Luscious. fate is not just |
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