whimsical beauty and pain of magic

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Open Poetry #29

whimsical beauty and pain of magic

pandonov
Member

since 2003-10-03

Posts 478
b/w conscience and insolence

0 posted 2003-10-03 03:09 PM

Few moments possess the magic.
Mud-sludge eyes,
black-grained quaitness-
abnormality to every-other-one.
Odd, inclined reality asymmetrically beautiful.
Drink,
quaff insanity,
strain the moment for a grain of inspiration,
enjoy the lust:
for couple lines
or string of colors to a blank.
Cause when it's gone,
a wait in patience is agony.

Lines, drained in normality
and cloned persistence to exist
bribe time to fly between two instances of life.

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

1 posted 2003-10-03 03:13 PM

well I love this, don't ask me why..it just speaks to me in many ways...

welcome, welcome, welcome

Maureen

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

2 posted 2003-10-03 03:13 PM

This is really amazing..

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2003-10-03 03:19 PM

Very nicely written Petre!
Welcome to Passions...
I look forward to more of your writing.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~Autumn, the year's last, loveliest smile~

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

4 posted 2003-10-03 03:38 PM

Ditto...I enjoyed it as well..

Susan

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