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Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

0 posted 2003-10-03 11:26 AM

“this has such a nice hand to it”

Draped as it is
A silken flow to contour
The curves in even more
                                 An enticement
To pull patterns and sew together
Perhaps a bit of dream
             Or maybe just to float
In the lazy easy way
Of something bias cut
        Across the top of your shoulders

Leaving neckline open
                  So in slight bend at waist
It reveals just enough
That thread is not frayed
                        Knots hold against weave
And I remember….
               “If cut right, it moves with you.”

This bolt will do….

I’d know the jealous touch
Of what tailored for you lies against skin
Hidden
             As if regret had stolen
The desires within

And ask you

Does it fit well
          Or shall I take it in

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

1 posted 2003-10-03 11:59 AM

Only you could do this..

You make it so darn sensual...

Susan

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

2 posted 2003-10-03 12:01 PM

Ron....So many feelings in cloth, and how to tailor it to fit.... I think your words fit just right!

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

3 posted 2003-10-03 12:35 PM

CPat~
This is steamstressed just right~

Just too too good~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
noles1@totcon.com

n2dmystic
Member

since 2003-09-27

Posts 253
beyond the doors of perception

4 posted 2003-10-03 01:06 PM

diggin' it. I want one. thank you

Peace, Joe
in the big MT
seeking the serendipitous magical mysteries of life's ubiquitous twisteries

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

5 posted 2003-10-03 01:13 PM

I think it's just perfect!

Yer soooo good!
~Hugs~

~Autumn, the year's last, loveliest smile~

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

6 posted 2003-10-03 01:31 PM

You have to keep doing this don't you? Just when I get your poems all numbered in the order I like them in my library, you go and throw me a curve ball! Darn this is my latest favorite now. Martie knows I am a sucker for using silk or material to describe us "human beans" and our feelings. Absolutely incredible - how on earth do you do this?

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

7 posted 2003-10-03 01:49 PM

Not only do you weave words well,
but you have knowledge of a bias cut

your eye misses nothing...

good for us.

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

8 posted 2003-10-03 02:21 PM

~sigh~

you weave gold well!
Lauren~

There's a song inside my soul
One that I've tried to write over and over again

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

9 posted 2003-10-03 02:23 PM

"  Knots hold against weave
And I remember….
               “If cut right, it moves with you.”

This bolt will do….

I’d know the jealous touch
Of what tailored for you lies against skin
Hidden
             As if regret had stolen
The desires within"

Gah, you're just an amazing writer..

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

10 posted 2003-10-03 03:01 PM

haa Ron..you do know I sew...and well at that...

I took my walk...finished off with a drink..and posted one for you above...

I am not sure it will satisfy but I can only do what comes naturally...

M

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