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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York 
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Suffer my heart to understand silent beatings of midnight a tiny bird in palm mid-flight waxing waning Beneath eye which shines for me us As the tide ebb-flow slide upon sand littered with letters of love lost and found again Within you , I have found home My berth a safe haven Nesting my last trip tip of wing safe within your freedom ------------------------------------------ James Lee . . . thank you for the inspiration The first line belongs to him . . . |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Buuu.ti..ful! Susan |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
ah..so very nice... so very nice indeed... |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Suffer my heart to understand silent beatings of midnight ~*~ They say the first lines have to keep you... these do. Well done, dear.... |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
Very nice.  Love, Terri~  Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer! |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Susie..so vey soft and beautiful..such depth in these words, full of grace. Immensely enjoyed poet friend... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Lovely Sue...perfectly lovely. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~Autumn, the year's last, loveliest smile~ |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
Within you , I have found home and home is where i want to be.............very pretty suzieq,very very pretty words |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sue "safe within your freedom" Amazing poetry!  |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
"As the tide ebb-flow slide upon sand littered with letters of love lost and found again" Turning as they do in that gentle breeze Revealing themselves To be nothing less than whispered promises And nothing more than hope... Susie, you honor me with this, as you do in all things. Love, Ed |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
gorgeous! |
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Thomas119gold Senior Member
since 2002-06-03
Posts 708Biloxi, MS (city by the sea) |
Nice I am glad I had time to stop and read this was worth it. Rogue |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
This made me feel better after I read it, but I don't know why. *smile* Thank you for sharing it. |
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Edder Senior Member
since 2003-04-02
Posts 671 |
You weave a fine nest of words...a place we'd all like to call home. |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Oh, so lovely.. |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
nicely penned,,,, |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
very nice sue |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Oh Sue, this is beautiful, sweet friend, your heart is where your aerie sits high so make it feel just like home always! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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Jason Lyle Senior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438With my darkling |
Sometimes it just in the understanding, that we suffer...nice write Sue. Jason |
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rkcraig Member
since 2003-02-27
Posts 202Cincinnati, Ohio, USA |
great work |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice read  |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Suffer my heart to understand silent beatings of midnight nice to be in love isn't it... hugss M |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
You make nesting hint of spring and new life. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Tweets~!!!! This is fabulous, so tender and delicate...so real and true! I envy your talent, in a good way! I do!!! |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Oh...Sue... this simply floats off the page... so very beautiful. Love it, my winged sis...smile Hugs, ~Vicky When the power of love overcomes the |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
LittleOne, love looks good on you.... very, very good!!! (BIG SMILES!!) Love ya Ethel |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
 you always make me do this And the angel said unto me, "These are the cries of the carrots, the cries of the carrots!" |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Susan? Thank you so much Ron. *smile* thank you Thank you Kari . . *smile* (the first line is James') Hey Terri, thank you so much Donna, to have you grace my words with yours is enough in itself thank you Nancy, perfect lovely, I like that *smile* - thank you Thank you Michele *smile* suzieq Thank you Martie and you, m'love honor me with you thank you for your beautiful response Thanks Dix! Hey Rogue- where have you been? Thanks for stopping by icey? *smile* I made you smile??? that makes me happy thank you aww Ed that is so sweet of you thank you Thank you Meg Hey Q - thank you Raph - *smile* thank you Noah - so very sweet to me thank you Thanks Jason, glad you liked rk - thank you Hey V - thank you so much  Maureen? Yes, heavenly thank you aww Kethry - thank you that did make me smile Bluesy, nothing to envy, even in a good way *smile* thank you so much tweets Vic? my winged sis ahaha that was good yes indeed I am and thank you ahhh I am so happy you see that Ethel thank you so much LittleOne Liz. no crying, happy tears *smile* thank you Thank you so much everyone xxoo [This message has been edited by littlewing (10-04-2003 02:28 PM).] |
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Ringo
since 2003-02-20
Posts 3684Saluting with misty eyes |
You should talk to Mr. Lee much, much more often... He has given you the inspiration for a beautiful write. We are all equal but we’re individually different |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
This is why I looooooves you soooo much!! this is pure..something lol..see I'm speechless *throws her pen away* If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
What more can one ask, then for a place to call home? Especially, when that nest lies within the heart of your beloved... This was beautiful Sue! Now you two get busy gathering up more twigs and such... Those chilly nights will be upon us soon... Richy |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I know this came from a place inside you that you share openly, called love. I think you couldn't have written a more delicate poem of "knowing real" if you tried, and I sure applaud you on this write. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
oh LIttlewing, so so happy to see you and read you again, I've missed you whole bunches...thank Goodnes for RON! A very beautiful write. Thank you  |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Home is where the heart is. Nest well, littlewing...  EA |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Silky smooth Sue...enjoyed...I will always believe with understanding, knowledge and wisdom we will find our way in this world...anything else is fear...James |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
This is wonderful and beautiful just like you.It speaks so much and shows the tenderness in your heart. Crystal |
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