Open Poetry #29 |
My Mistress |
Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
My Mistress She is the mistress of my mind One I search and cannot find I know that she’s upon this earth For earth is mother to her birth. She leaves me little gentile clues A sky that’s filled with gorgeous hews The emerald of a sea of gleam The wonder of a night of dream She tiptoes through my flowerbed And odors me about my head Caresses me with winds above Whispering a song of love. She is the siren of my art The strings that play upon my heart That hosts me with a ghost of spend That never seems to ever end. She is the mistress of my mind Yet with these clues I still can’t find. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Hear this voice only in thy mind shut thy eyes, that you would find mental reach of grasp, in kind... in search of one, thus unwind... ~*~ Close your eyes, Sy...she's right there.... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine That's when I search the most. LOL |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Lovely, and Sunshines comment was simply beautiful.... Good Morning to ya Sy, and Happy Happy Friday! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Lee, Top of the morning to ya sweety. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Beautiful Seymour Maree. fate is not just |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
As always I enjoyed , what you expressed with loving heart Seymour your words are a work of art !!! Hope |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I know that she’s upon this earth For earth is mother to her birth. She leaves me little gentile clues A sky that’s filled with gorgeous hews The emerald of a sea of gleam The wonder of a night of dream She tiptoes through my flowerbed And odors me about my head Caresses me with winds above Whispering a song of love. ============================= Youre so cute...I just love this one's tender, clever wit and analogy. Mother Earth loves having you as a suitor How could she resist you???? WHO COULD??? " Not I" said the moth. *winkiewinkie* Morning sweet Sy-babes "Nature's first green is gold, |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
...I'm over here, Master... ~ She's calling you. Listen with your heart and you will find her... Angel hugs & kisses, EA |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Not even me...Toerag, could make a "joke" out of such a wonderful piece of poetry...well done sir... |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Sounds like the queen of all mistresses to me, dear Sy - This is lovely... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Ah, and she is the whisper in the wind.. Sounds as though you have found the perfect mistress Sy! Come, have some tea and tell me more?! Have a good TGIFriday! ~Morning hugs & tea, Nancy~ ~Autumn, the year's last, loveliest smile~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Dark Angel Thank you sweety. HopeS And thank you dear. Jm, As long as I have my tinkerbell. WWRS Earth Angel, She lives in my heart, it's the other four senses Im worried about. LOL Toerag You have melted my wax. LOL Stay well Nan, If I could only tell her that. LOL Hugs |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
She is the mistress of my mind Yet with these clues I still can’t find. yes HE is that for me too, seymour |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Nancy, Good idea, be right over. inkedgoddess LOL glad you agree. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Nature truly has a way of celebrating all of the virtues and ideals that are pure with magic, sweet friend, this is absolutely vivid and gorgeous, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Ah...this is beautiful, my friend... and as JM said...who could resist? Love this, Sy... When the power of love overcomes the |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Dear Sy The mistress of your mind and heart Is in the verse that you impart Her beauty is without an end She lives within your poet pen Yes, poetry is the mistress known To all the eyes to which you've shown A kiss bestowed a waiting breast A phrase that gives a sweet caress You are the master, my friend Liz |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Dare I sigh, and Sy again! You are one fine poet, a happily ever, wonder of words! Mr. Seymour Tabin~ you can take your bows now, and all you want to!!! Every single day you write.... I'm reading you, and I have to tell ya, you are a master of poetic skill. And so much more than that! I don't mean to gush, it's the ~sea~ in me, and she's so sentimental! *applause* |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Seymour...I sure hope your search ends on the road of happiness. I always enjoy reading your poetry sir. I see even Toerag couldn't find anything bad to say about this one. Maybe there's hope for him yet in his old age. LOL...Paul "To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you" |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Noah, Always enjoy your relpies, thank you. Elizabeth, Your response could not make me happier. BluesSerenade You are a sweetheart. Hugs. Paul, You are a friend indeed. Thank you. |
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