Open Poetry #29 |
Shade |
1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
Shade there is a piece of me that I took out today placed it carefully out of reach so far away until I know it is safe to bring it back out again and when will that be I don’t know when "I am living a life, i have no wish to live. How did this happen?" Unknown |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
1slick_lady, Enjoyed the read. |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
very good thoughts to ponder,,, I liked this,,,
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Yep...been there too. Well said, Helen. When the power of love overcomes the |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
don't put your words out of reach behind that wall.... that would be a great loss ~~ Connie ~~ |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Helen~ Touching and very near what I am about to do..my piece will be put away for four years...*sigh* Susan |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) Just make sure that is always close by as you can't afford to lose it also! (big hugggssssss) This is deep and honest writing, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
My thoughts exactly.Well penned. Crystal |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
I hope it is in the treasured place that it deserves . . . gift wrapped e |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
sometimes when you get burnt so badly, the shade is a good thing |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Ouch... I do know this. Excellent write, lady! *S* |
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Amature2 Member
since 2001-01-08
Posts 416 |
1slick_lady, just remember "Time is on your side" |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
Slick Perhaps the piece of you that you "took out today" and "placed out of reach" Is a piece of your heart? If so, then you have answered your own question. You have brought it "back out again" for all to see in the words of this poem. enjoyed the read.....ice/ford |
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alisa Member
since 2003-08-20
Posts 70Florida |
this is wonderful....i hope this day will come soon. |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Please....let me know how you did that. I'd like to be able to accomplish that feat myself, from time to time, but I can't quite manage it. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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