Drowning In Him (so old i cant even remember when i wrote it)

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Open Poetry #29

Drowning In Him (so old i cant even remember when i wrote it)

KoKo
Senior Member

since 2003-02-15

Posts 995
Inside the shadow's shadow

0 posted 2003-10-02 09:28 PM

The beautiful woman
That lived by the sea
Her eyes of teal
And her hair of honey
Was swept in the air that
Smelled so sweet
Of pineapple slices
And sugary heat.

She was thrown to the sea
Of crisp, blue waves
And gave into her tempting,
Crying out craves.

She drowned in this man
She drowned for all the saddness
She drowned for loss of hope and light
And in him,
She drowned for waste of love and life.

[This message has been edited by KoKo (10-02-2003 09:29 PM).]

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

1 posted 2003-10-02 11:16 PM

(big hugggsssssss) Oh Lauren, this is beautiful but sad, sweet friend, now I hope soon that beautiful woman finds a smile on her face and again rises to the surface and sings a happy siren song! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lauren, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

2 posted 2003-10-02 11:34 PM

Beautiful..

angelblueyes
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2148
Oklahoma

3 posted 2003-10-03 12:12 PM

This is beautiful, but sad.May she soon find happiness within her.

Crystal

SharaRose
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2501
Somewhere out there~

4 posted 2003-10-03 12:20 PM

As long as there is breath there is hope. There are others that have a capacity to love her. Encourage her in that. That's her life preserver is the hope that it's not all the end. It's just a beginning to find love.

Love,
Terri~

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

Edder
Senior Member

since 2003-04-02

Posts 671

5 posted 2003-10-03 02:11 PM

Good to see this one again! When do we get more? I happen to know for a fact you have a ton of em! luv ya

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

6 posted 2003-10-03 02:13 PM

Drowning...yea..I know.

Excellent!

Susan

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