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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Aberration Abbreviated shadows fall Upon my pseudo bedroom wall Silhouettes of painted gleams Playing with my egos dreams Medium of grays of mime Dancing on the sands of time. Liberating echoes call Lacing them upon my wall Bringing up the good and bad Lights of sad and sprites of glad Making piecemeal of my mind Having peeled away the rind. Shaking me in seeds of fret Ending up in beads of sweat Sending flashes that are hot Lashing me into a knot. One must let the foibles straight Before you set a symbols date. |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Thoughts wrought distraught have brought...? Good morning Sy. -MVS You CAN make a difference: |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
very good write,,, |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Mark, Thank you my friend. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
QjQ And thank you for the read and reply. |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
"Shaking me in seeds of fret Ending up in beads of sweat Sending flashes that are hot Lashing me into a knot. One must let the foibles straight Before you set a symbols date." Sy...wow...this is too cool! I love it! I feel like I should be chanting it over and over. Excellent, poet sir.  When the power of love overcomes the |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Ah Sy..do things that go bump in the night make you fret and sweat? It's only shadows of trees and such love... Have some tea and perhaps a nap. Excellent write this morn. ~Morning hugs & tea, Nancy~
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
vlraynes You are a dear and I thank you for the wonderful comment.  Nancy You're right about bump in the night. And I think the tea will help.  |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Things that go bump in the night or thoughts that scream for resolution? Morning Sy! Susan |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Susan, Thank you sweet for the read and reply. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Good morning, Sir Tumbleweed! I do believe you are going through menopause!  --and I can give you an herbal remedy that will help you with those hot flashes! lolAngel hugs 'n kissums, EA |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Sy, you know how people have "favorite words" that they either like to see in print, or simply roll over their tongue for the feel of it? Well, Sir...you used several of my favorite words in this one, so I hereby proclaim it [again] a  and will be placing this on the Seymour Tabin shelf in my library...  Good morning Sy.... |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Shaking me in seeds of fret Ending up in beads of sweat Sending flashes that are hot Lashing me into a knot. ======================== Randy wrote that verse  LOLMaking piecemeal of my mind Having peeled away the rind. youre so kewl...love the word play in this Sy-babes...and the cadence is rock and roll poetry. You are the DJ of too cool   |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Ah, methinks the sweets have been a wee bit too heavy with your tea lately. Sorry about that dear sir. To-day lets nibble on some fluffy marshmallow cookies. They will bring dreams as soft as a feather down. Great write my friend. hugs, Chris  Let your life lightly dance on the edges of Time like dew on the tip of a leaf. -Tagore |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Hello Sy and good day to you....perhaps maybe you might like to take St. John's Wart with me....Bonnie suggested it, and I think it has a lovely soothing effect on those nasty old hormones, the ones with little arms and legs...smiles.... Thank you for the write. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine Thank you, you are a love. |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
Sy, you dazzle my mind every morning. Crystal |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Earth Angel Perhaps just a cool hand will do. JM, Are you geting friendly with Randy. LOL He gets excited ever time you mention him. WWRS Chris, That's a good idea. Hugs. LeeJ If I take St. John's Wart I wont have anything to write about. LOL |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Crystal WEll, that's better then frazzle. LOL |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) This too is one of my favorite words, sweet friend, of course I love almost all words and you are a wizard wordsmith so everybody wins! (big hugggssssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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Eromyna Member
since 2002-11-29
Posts 306Pheonix, AZ, USA |
Mmmm. Skilled wordplay is such a treat for me. "I don't need to scream for you to deem me aggravation." |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Nightime brings the gobblins gruesome! Core |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Noah, Always a pleasure for you to comment on my work. Eromyna My pleasure and thank you. Corinne Sometimes it brings good stuff too. |
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