Open Poetry #29 |
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Questions In Life.., |
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youngmoeses New Member
since 2003-08-29
Posts 6 |
relax,hustle, find peace, and then struggle, to reach completion shady ways where the road was paved, with hells secretions/ one bedroom ghettos spots, to a penthouse in the venetian on a treadmill with a corvette engine, and a door i'm never reachin/ my speach patterns, release tattered emotions, from an open cut spoke too soon cus a tomb's created from a mothers gut/ where i loom, the sun shines in a refraction of smog even comedians' gangsters, steady laughin too hard/ critics, hop on ridick bowes, then weep and woe when they fall children neglected by talents, don't even know when they call/ stalled movements, ever eludin touch, they'll never be reached a new wind has brought a breath of air that has yet to been breathed/ i wonder if ideas have thoughts of they own, or if planets have homes if god has a brother... if so why ain't he king of the throne?/ do clones know they ain't original, do trees have subliminal names does blood feel like it's on a rollar coaster ride when creepin in veins/ does metal feel remorse for keepin prisoners chained?... do the faces on my cards know that they livin a game?.../ do dead people speak... in a frequency uncharted when they think of us are we refered to as dearly departed/ do answers ever ask questions, then get frustrated with silence does eternity feel boredom when it remembers it's timeless?/ do apostles read the gospel, realize mistakes and then fret when jesus turned one fish into a thousand did he mourn for their deaths?/ when my father walks in heaven, does he realize that he's dead? are these crazy questions, or answers to the lies in my head/ |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
enjoyed your write,,, very interesting thoughts expressed,, |
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JilGirl Member
since 2003-05-24
Posts 364Washington |
Interesting write! Questions are never "crazy." Lies will be exposed. Truth will replace the lies and truth always triumphs! Blessings! Shirl 'Tiz feathers that make the bird - |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
Intriguing write.Questions are always asked, but not always easily answered. ![]() Crystal |
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