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Open Poetry #29

Jump Out Of My Head

youngmoeses
New Member

since 2003-08-29

Posts 6

0 posted 2003-09-22 05:30 AM

just something i wrote in about 5 minutes

Jump out of my head,
i wouldn't have ears any more to hear the noise
i wouldn't have eyes to see the suprise of boys
when they find out that other kids have dads/
I'd have no nose, to smell washington dc's stink
of politicians...
no hands to feel the concrete scream broken dreams through haunting visions/
no feet to run, from trying times,
no brain to tell me, this is what it's s'posed to say, and this is how it's s'posed to rhyme/
no ego to ask questions, i'd live in bliss
with ignorance
simple sense, and innocent, earth abiding diligance/

[This message has been edited by youngmoeses (09-22-2003 05:31 AM).]

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

1 posted 2003-09-22 05:33 AM

An interesting write here.
I enjoyed the flow of this.

~Vicky
When the power of love overcomes the
love of power the world will know peace.
-Jimi Hendrix

QjQ
Member Elite

since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
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2 posted 2003-09-22 05:35 AM

interesting,,,,

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