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Open Poetry #29

Masking The Sadness

HopeS
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since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

0 posted 2003-10-02 04:56 AM

Masking The Sadness

Off into my quiet place
When I am feeling low
There I can cry for hours
No one will ever know

By muffling the sound
I hold the pillow tight
Laid hidden in sorrow
With no need for light

Aching heart yearning
Hurt releasing silently
Onto the softest pillow
No one shall ever see

Masking the sadness
This secret is all mine
I will then return smiling
I can pretend I am fine

Hope©2003

gemjop
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since 2002-11-18

Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA

1 posted 2003-10-02 04:58 AM

Hope! Oh if this is real experience, oh I just want to hug you. This reminded me of a memory of my mother crying in her room. emotional write hon, hope youre ok.

loads and loads of love and hugs.
xxxxxxxxxx

~I wanna live, I wanna give, I've been a miner for a heart of gold~ Neil Young

n2dmystic
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since 2003-09-27

Posts 253
beyond the doors of perception

2 posted 2003-10-02 04:59 AM

"fine" stands for (f___ed up, insecure, neurotic, emotional). I feel you, I know. thank you for sharing a part of you. Oh, you caused me to feel a little sad. very nice

Peace, Joe
in the big MT
seeking the serendipitous magical mysteries of life's ubiquitous twisteries

HopeS
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since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

3 posted 2003-10-02 05:57 AM

Thank you Gem , yes I am ok ,I did pen a poem of loving sensual thoughts only yesterday , it must have slipped over the page

Hope

HopeS
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since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

4 posted 2003-10-02 06:00 AM

hey Jo , this poets emotions go to and fro ,as the poems says , the real me you will never know , you might say I am neurotic but hey I also write erotic LOL
Hope

QjQ
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since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

5 posted 2003-10-02 06:28 AM

nice write lady poetress,,,,,

HopeS
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since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

6 posted 2003-10-02 07:33 AM

thank you Glenn for your kind reply and understanding , it is so much appreciated
Hope

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