Open Poetry #29 |
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Crystal Wave |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) ![]() |
Crystal wave Is it me on the mountainside? My heart will not behave, for it’s she on the ocean tide on ride of crystal wave. As I watch her from above- her eyes reveal the sea As I can’t help but shout my love- the waves crash silently. Puffing hard, the virgin shore, too red to think that when she’d never knew of me before she’d want to know me then. The salt waves crash her finite name The well is at its worst I follow from the place she came but not to quench my thirst Crystal wave in hardening sea Beckon, swallow all of me. |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
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Tim Senior Member
since 1999-06-08
Posts 1794 |
good'un Walt, enjoyed. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
As I watch her from above- her eyes reveal the sea As I can’t help but shout my love- the waves crash silently. That's a nice view~ |
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n2dmystic Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 253beyond the doors of perception |
yeah, I agree, "swallow all of me" in your love. beautiful. thank you Peace, Joe |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
"Is it me on the mountainside? My heart will not behave, for it’s she on the ocean tide on ride of crystal wave." Love this, Walty...simply beautiful... ![]() Hugs, ~Vicky When the power of love overcomes the |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Keep em comin Walty... Have missed you. Maree. ![]() fate is not just |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() (smiles) Oh Walty, I absolutely love this, dearest friend, and may the sea foam rise all over you and the undertow of love bring you under, sweet friend, I love this, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Walter, thank you for sharing! ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
wayoutwalt Glad to see you back. ![]() |
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cruz Member
since 2000-07-18
Posts 282Dallas,Texas USA |
this one takes me to a place with some wonderful thoughts of the beauty of women but there's a realization of how illusive they can be. especially liked the silence of the crashing waves! thanks for sharing your words... |
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