Open Poetry #29 |
The Tower |
ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
In life's climbing walls layered of blood and stone your name softly calls echo's of my moan whispered in these halls emptied, now alone above where rain falls in clouds of grey tone where endless time crawls forever, my throne - the tower One's outlook can be another's expression. [This message has been edited by ctowen (09-22-2003 12:02 AM).] |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
I like this very much. Enjoyed the rhyme scheme too. Nicely done. Hugs, ~Vicky When the power of love overcomes the |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
enjoyed,,,
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
well done, sir |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Even when alone, we're not alone. We're right there with ourselves the whole time. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
much better and thanks again,truly |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
your are indeed a towering poet, wonderfully expressed! |
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