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Professor Gloom
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since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

0 posted 2003-10-01 12:11 PM

He sees victims on the concrete walkway,
And Follows them as they struggled away
For now was the twilight of their last day,
When darkness falls it will be time to slay.
Unseen he walks in their still warm footfall
They saw not him or anyone at all
Caught fully by a deadly chemical
Unreleased by the drug’s mental enthrall.
In alley dark they are watched taking the death
And the collector waits for the final breath.
As body slumps and spirit tries to soar;
But all their crimes return to them once more
Remembering on livings final brink
Then ethereal screams sound as they slowly sink.

Gloom

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2003-10-01 12:27 PM

*shivers*

QjQ
Member Elite

since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

2 posted 2003-10-01 08:09 PM

enjoyed the read....

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

3 posted 2003-10-02 02:32 PM

As body slumps and spirit tries to soar;
But all their crimes return to them once more

darn you were gloomy yesterday...

hope today is a bit brighter although it does seem colder...

M

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

4 posted 2003-10-02 02:55 PM

(big hugggsssssss) Oh Aszard, this is truly a deep and haunting write, sweet friend, I hope all is well as I feel too many people are left having to struggle in these shadows, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Aszard, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

Lotus Breeze
Member

since 2003-09-06

Posts 112

5 posted 2003-10-02 05:51 PM

Beauty of write is shaded by subject choice, like you in city, need lighter place
Need cheering, need be happy, I always have liked you writes, especially the few light ones wrote long ago

I read and learn from you

angelblueyes
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2148
Oklahoma

6 posted 2003-10-03 01:23 AM

Thisis eerie, but spoken in truth.Your eyes and heart share so much both of dark and light.

Crystal

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

7 posted 2003-10-03 11:45 AM

"As body slumps and spirit tries to soar;
But all their crimes return to them once more"

Those two lines...wow!

Scary.

Susan

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