Open Poetry #29 |
I Won't Be Ignored---Kaorus' challenge |
Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Don't walk away Don't turn your back For once, just once Hear what I have to say It don't have to be This way between us Just this once Don't ignore me This time...I won't be ignored This time...you'll finally see This time...there's no going back This time...will never be Don't shut me out I know I'm just a kid Can't you just listen You don't have to shout I'm so afraid Of this pain inside But you won't stop 'til all the blames been laid This time...please just hear me This time...don't slam the door This time...hear my pleading This time...I won't be ignored Now all thats left Is an empty room Two parents hearts Battered and bereft All it really takes Is an open heart For once, just once Give the kid a break This time...theres no one to listen This time...just an emptiness This time...there's no second chance This time...can't be ignored Inspired by a Lincoln Park song |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Wonderfully met! I love this |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggssssssss) Oh, you must be talking about that song "Faint", dearest friend, I have heard that song and though I'm not a Linkin Park fan (I'm not big on new heavy rock music), I understand the emotions so well in that song and no one should ever be denied or neglected! (sad sigh) This is a wonderful challenge response, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Paula, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
Excellent! |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Just straighten your hat, shake loose your pistols, and turn that corner toward OK Corral..... ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Hey, you turning songwriter and sqeezing me out? I thought we were pals!! Just kidding, this is a fine job Paula and it contains a pertinent message. Eric The best teachers have the biggest ears |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
OOOOPS...just goes to show how much I pay attention to names...mispelled Linkin Park...duh...anyways thanks guys...oh and Eric...whats a little healthy competition among friends huh? GO BLUES!!!!! |
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