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Open Poetry #29

Concealed Fate

Ku'uipo
Junior Member

since 2003-09-25

Posts 42

0 posted 2003-10-01 08:41 AM

Let's create the cosmic dream
Love ecclectic, chaotic, real
Impermiable wonder, indescribable state
Of livid serenity, honest true
Mass emotion, feeling minute
Cringing, twisting, inside out
Lip to cheek, tongue to mouth
Breathless enlightenment, outside in
Cornered in a vast universe of
Me and you, you and me
Were meant to be, a pictured pair
Of hopeless devotion, starcrossed, rare
Friendless foes of insanity clear
Picked from the sky, star to my heart
The romance unseen was meant to be

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

1 posted 2003-10-01 08:44 AM

Ku' . . . yes, I know exactly what you
portray here, I feeeel it
lovely writing
xxoo
(I adore your name. I miss Kauai)

QjQ
Member Elite

since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.