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Martie

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California

0 posted 2003-09-30 09:41 PM

where churning is cloistered
prisms spirals down
into silver eyes
through her streets
a glow with sand tinted steep slide
her cold fire reaps
the quiet crackle of somnolence

icebox
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since 2003-05-03

Posts 4383
in the shadows

1 posted 2003-09-30 09:46 PM

"I've been dreaming of a moon shadow"

*smile*

vlraynes
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since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

2 posted 2003-09-30 09:46 PM

Martie...have I told you lately how beautiful you are?
Well you are...and so is this.

Love and hugs to you, my friend...
When the power of love overcomes the
love of power the world will know peace.
-Jimi Hendrix

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2003-09-30 09:51 PM

Ah, one of my favourite Cat Steven's songs...
Lovely poetess Martie.
~Hugs~

~ I love your glances meeting mine
across forever or the room ~

Ratleader

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since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

4 posted 2003-09-30 10:19 PM

where churning is cloistered
                              swallows wheel in sunlight
prisms spirals down
                          their chicks nested in the cloisters
into silver eyes
                      stars shimmer above the ivy
through her streets
                along the road of sky
a glow with sand tinted steep slide
            they will follow, follow her
her cold fire reaps
        seeking her feathered flame
the quiet crackle of somnolence
    and she will lead them home

~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº>
______________Ratleader______________

garysgirl

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since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

5 posted 2003-10-01 12:11 PM

Absolutely beautiful, sweet Martie...
just beautiful!!

Hugs

Ethel

Mistletoe Angel

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Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

6 posted 2003-10-01 01:12 AM

(smiles) Oh Martie, is this your response to Kaoru's challenge because I love this son and this sounded so harmonic to Cat Stevens! (kiss on cheek) I just love the wonderful grace your words offer, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Martie, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

Richy
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since 2003-05-03

Posts 3050

7 posted 2003-10-01 09:20 AM

Ohhh, what would we do without the moon?

And what would we do, without you?

Heavenly Martie!

Richy

littlewing
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since 2003-03-02

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New York

8 posted 2003-10-01 05:10 PM

Martie . . .
now all I need is a lullaby
*smile*
beautiful she is . . .
and you
xxoo

suthern

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since 1999-07-29

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Louisiana

9 posted 2003-10-01 07:15 PM

I love both your poem and Ratleader's response to it... and know what I'll be humming all evening! LOL

Goodknight
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Ohio, USA

10 posted 2003-10-03 10:44 AM

wonderful poem Martie - i got lost in the moon shadows and they are following me - Paul

dingusjr
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Missouri

11 posted 2003-10-03 10:46 AM

Wow...Martie and the Rat make a great team..
enjoyed both! Larry

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla

12 posted 2003-10-03 10:51 AM

Martie,
Lovely words, lovely write.

Marge Tindal

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Florida's Foreverly Shores

13 posted 2003-10-03 10:52 AM

SweetSis~

Heavenly is this~
And worked with Ed's magic ... a real keeper~

WONDERFUL !!
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
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Logan
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since 2001-05-28

Posts 1641
Arkansas

14 posted 2003-10-08 01:58 AM

Ahh, dear Martie. Your words fall as easily as the moonbeams...very gentle smile

Sudhir Iyer
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since 2000-04-26

Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium

15 posted 2003-10-08 04:21 PM

Lovely work this one...

and wonderful to see Ratleader's entwined lines...

Thanks for the treat...

Regards
Sudhir

Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

16 posted 2003-10-08 04:24 PM

How did I miss this?
Thank you, Martie...

Corinne
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since 1999-10-28

Posts 5167
state of confusion

17 posted 2003-10-08 04:27 PM

this is lovely, Martie!

Cor

Sunnyone
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since 2000-07-06

Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England

18 posted 2003-10-08 04:48 PM

Beautiful, and I really appreciated the images that floated into my mind with this one!!! Very very nicely done, and a pleasure to read...~S~

Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart ~S~

Alwye

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In the space between moments

19 posted 2003-10-08 09:07 PM

*sigh* I swear, you're one of my favorite poets, famous or otherwise...I loved the entire image. You are an artist with words, my friend.

*Krista Knutson*

"If we have no peace, it is because we've forgotten that we belong to each other." ~Mother Teresa

Dark Angel
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since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

20 posted 2003-10-10 12:48 PM

This is absolutely charming Martie, as you are m'dear.

Glad I caught this.

Maree

fate is not just
whose cooking smells good
but which way the wind blows

(Ani DiFranco)

angelblueyes
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since 2003-07-19

Posts 2148
Oklahoma

21 posted 2003-10-10 01:10 AM

This is very beautiful.

Crystal

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