Open Poetry #29 |
Having The Right Stuff |
Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
This invisible trail of seduction, wafting delicately within my senses. I knew the name, yet the wearer of such finery was yet to be seen. I prayed that this trail would remain fresh before me. So many delicate things I have noticed over years of becoming more aware of sense than cents or sex. The way of how nails are kept immaculately fine and cleaned, polished clear and natural. The softness of hair that is combed immaculately. The blouse that hides yet reveals ever slightly the delicacies of a sensual woman, revealing, yet hiding the inner desires. Lips that are natural or lightly glossed so that they appear glistening and moist....or a soft red that accents yet does not overpower the beauty of a woman’s face. A light blush to the cheeks, very sensual and passionate. Lashes that highlight the eyes, yet allow the true color to gleam and capture. Eyes reveal so much of the inner person and soul. Fine wines age slowly and only better with age. Silk is silk, and a butterfly lands ever softly on the hand. So too does she....she who wears that exquisite scent that is so alluring as hips softly sway and eyes say to a man that she has the stuff, the right stuff!!! |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Oh Barry, this is beautiful, sweet friend, such an innocent sensuality fills these words, and truly the grace of a woman makes up all that wonderful stuff, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
Fine wines age slowly and only better with age. Silk is silk, and a butterfly lands ever softly on the hand. terrific penning,, Sir Poet
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Barry... "Fine wines age slowly and only better with age. Silk is silk, and a butterfly lands ever softly on the hand." I must remember this tomorrow. |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
I have very specific reasons for loving this so much.. I am saving this... Susan |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Barry...this is truly beautiful...in every way. Hugs to you, my friend... When the power of love overcomes the |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Barry . . . I couldnt agree with you more: Fine wines age slowly and only better with age. Silk is silk, and a butterfly lands ever softly on the hand. Beautiful writing, my goodness xxoo |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
You are a man who truly appreciates the 'fairer' sex. Smiling... EA |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
There are *many* reasons to love being a woman, but this is the *sweetest* one. Thanks for noticing!!! Shara~ Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer! |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Fine wines age slowly and only better with age. Silk is silk, and a butterfly lands ever softly on the hand. Simply lovely as is the entire poem....thank you for sharing |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
This is wonderful and I'm keeping it. That way everytime I need my heart touched, I'll just come back to your write. Crystal |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Oh the allure is like magic and mystery all rolled into one. This is a beauty, Barry~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Magnus Hey barry you taking poetry pills? This is a keeper. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice read |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Magnus~ You simply turn the senses of a woman~ This is breathtakingly lovely~ I combine a touch of silk with White Shoulders~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, the spirit rejoices over what it has left. - Sufi epigram [email protected] [This message has been edited by Marge Tindal (09-23-2003 09:34 PM).] |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Ooh, if she's half of this, she does indeed! ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Fine wines age slowly and only better with age. Silk is silk, and a butterfly lands ever softly on the hand. So too does she....she who wears that exquisite scent that is so alluring as hips softly sway and eyes say to a man that she has the stuff, the right stuff!!! Oh yes, Barry, the eyes will always tell... Hugs Ethel > [This message has been edited by garysgirl (09-25-2003 11:00 AM).] |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Fine wines age slowly and only better with age. Silk is silk, and a butterfly lands ever softly on the hand. So too does she....she who wears that exquisite scent that is so alluring as hips softly sway and eyes say to a man that she has the stuff, the right stuff!!! And those of us who lack sigh in envy of her... and appreciation of this tribute! *S* |
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