Open Poetry #29 |
Woman |
LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Woman Dew and moist tropical air, pour inspiration Like delicate vibrations of nerves Effortless harmony echoes, superb, rare The ingenious heart of dreams Swirling and singing like fond remembrances Childhood and leafy sprays of morning roses And the inevitable importance equally driven Woman! Forming a community, most narrative and romantic Like wings of thought, slipping over calm waves Free in the wind where we are brought together In delicate flecks of hypothesis, sipping on the Energy of summer, and the crystal clear azure sea Floating, motionless A prayer where energy is never contained We vision life’s mysteries and future, the mood of ecstasy That touches everything, atoms drifting free in space A market screaming volumes, smoothing rough surfaces Embracing soft lips of twilight amorous Like a ripple in the universe, every fiber streaming silver emulsions I am a wish with power, privileged motion, and an eagle’s claw A Goddess of harvested golden rays…a greenhouse of consumption An ardent path of light, and some periodical event I am child, who requires the touch of morning’s dove Spiritual, Submitting to the tests of inspiration, encompassing a rich globe Directly me precisely to an unknown place Bright white prose, endless like a waterfall Gestures whispering intimacy in the rain Cool like the silent stars, leading the way And I dare think of candles, their flames drifting into emptiness Literally vacant seas of eternity, where we shall savor its taste, easy like the rocking waves Where our losses become dust, inheritance, still waiting to be claimed. |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
fabulous write,,,
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Always amazing and diverse... |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
Literally vacant seas of eternity, where we shall savor its taste, easy like the rocking waves Sensuality at it's best here lee. Told you i was gonna hunt you down. Like a ripple in the universe, every fiber streaming silver emulsions I am a wish with power, privileged motion, and an eagle’s claw A Goddess of harvested golden rays…a greenhouse of consumption An ardent path of light, and some periodical event I am child, who requires the touch of morning’s dove Damn woman, you truly are woman! I do look up to your writes Lee, they are never lacking of insight. p.s, don't know if i've said this already but,love the new pic, pretty lady. |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Lee you write with the grace of one who has been there and back again Like wings of thought, slipping over calm waves Free in the wind where we are brought together yes, beautiful and this: I am child, who requires the touch of morning’s dove Spiritual, timeless xxoo |
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