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KoKo Senior Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 995Inside the shadow's shadow |
In death, I weep Above a space I cleared in the leaves I wish only, in these last moments To be re-born Into creatures I've always felt Were my only friends So that I may hold roots With my rough-skinned grandmother And ancient grandfather. I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
We have a lot of spirits walking around today... it's good to see so much centering going on... Well done, KoKo |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
a fallen giant in the forest knows his own roots are twined with all that came before and will come after... Ents perhaps... and we as slow witted as we are and as unkind, do not know them for that which they truly are.. nicely done Koko |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Koko, I like your poem... it made me think, which is a good thing. Hugs  Ethel |
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Edder Senior Member
since 2003-04-02
Posts 671 |
Oh, you just get better and better! where do you get this wisdom my child? luv ya |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Excellent write Koko |
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