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Autumn's Kiss ( a duet with Susan C.)
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Autumn's Kiss ( a duet with Susan C.) |
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Edder Senior Member
since 2003-04-02
Posts 671 |
A chance meeting on the square and the chill of autumn's kiss brings longing for summer's wine Warmth so the soul may linger... Anesthetic to the ache of regret I cover it neatly with a smile wondering if you hear my heart break over footsteps in the leaves Know that with every footfall A piece of me Shatters, splintering my soul Like an icicle falling from tree In the hush of winter's death Does not the ache in my eyes Plead for you to warm me With your kiss- Protect me with your strength Caress the softness of my skin Like the wrap of a warm spring day And I shall whisper your name to the wind Show me that you will not throw me away As the season rids itself of life To hibernate in the shield of cold indifference Utter words that bind me, willingly unto you, so that I may hear your voice in the swirl of November wind and know this love survives. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 excellent! You two fit well! |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Thank you Dixie! It was so much fun doing it. |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Well done, both of you! |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
yes... well done indeed. A fine blending of lines and talent.. well done you two!! |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Thank you Meg and Ron!! |
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KoKo Senior Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 995Inside the shadow's shadow |
-Deep sigh- That was beautiful. You two are absolutely wonderful together.  for you two! |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Poetry in motion... a beautiful write! |
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Edder Senior Member
since 2003-04-02
Posts 671 |
Dixie- two peas in a pod! *grin* Meg- thanks much, but she gets all the credit. Ron- thank you, kind sir Lauren- thanks hon! And? i'm still waiting... Sunshine- thank you for the read and the wonderful compliment! |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
The truth: Ed and I started talking (poetry of course) and found a lot in common. I suggested we duet. He wrote most of it and I am in complete awe. Thank you  Thank you Koko and Karilea! |
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KoKo Senior Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 995Inside the shadow's shadow |
dont mind me...just bumping ^_^ |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Love hopes and endures all things and can certainly thaw the icicles of every November and January! (big group hug) This is such a gorgeous duet, sweet Edder and Susan, you truly are a spiritual poetry team, I love it, we all love you both so much! You have such beautiful hearts, sweet Susan and Edder, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you both! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
beautiful you 2 |
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Edder Senior Member
since 2003-04-02
Posts 671 |
Lauren- thanks for the bump hon! sorry I was so busy yesterday- we'll talk soon, I promise Noah- thank you so much Helen- thank you dear, it's good to see you here |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
Nicely woven, a thing of beauty! Thank you both for sharing your creation. |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Susan and Ed: this is timeless . . . something forged from the Earth itself if you hear my heart break over footsteps in the leaves God, what a beautiful lines Amazing joining here of two exceptional writers xxoo |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Thank you all! |
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Edder Senior Member
since 2003-04-02
Posts 671 |
icebox- thank you, it was a pleasure to do. Sue- timeless? wow! thanks |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
So much to be said, for indifference! You're in fine tune you two. I absolutely loved reading your duetting. It speaks to me!  Oh thank you for this, awwww, hmmmm, yes!!! |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
loved this |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
To be in love in Autumn...  Nice duetting ya'll!! |
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