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1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2003-09-30 10:04 AM

One Last One

I’ll go on
now as if
nothing ever
really changed
but we both
know it did
the secrets
that we shared
with no one
hiding the stains
where tears fell
on silk and
the damn weather
crawling in
promising to
bring yellow
but that too
didn’t matter
I wouldn’t be
able to see it
across the grey

"wish your room had room for two" John Mayer

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

1 posted 2003-09-30 11:15 AM

Melancholy, wistful write Helen...
well done!
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~ I love your glances meeting mine
across forever or the room ~

James_A_Fraser
Senior Member

since 2003-09-03

Posts 972
Out Making Anticlines

2 posted 2003-09-30 11:40 AM

Heart talk, a rare and beautiful thing though it can be a hard thing too. I hope you fared well with it. Either way, don't give up hope, that yellow weather wins out every time if you wait for the clouds to fade.

~~J

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2003-09-30 12:26 PM

always in my head...

alisa
Member

since 2003-08-20

Posts 70
Florida

4 posted 2003-09-30 12:33 PM

you are amazing....

Edder
Senior Member

since 2003-04-02

Posts 671

5 posted 2003-09-30 12:35 PM

you write this so well...may your "yellow" always be sunshine

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

6 posted 2003-09-30 12:56 PM

You put me in awe...

bslicker

Member Elite

since 2000-12-04

Posts 2321
state of mind

7 posted 2003-09-30 01:31 PM

good write

bernie

A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

8 posted 2003-09-30 04:06 PM

sighs

Wind

Member Elite

since 2002-10-12

Posts 2981

9 posted 2003-09-30 04:14 PM

grey is good. though yellow is better. you ache in this one...

And the angel said unto me, "These are the cries of the carrots, the cries of the carrots!"
-Tool

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

10 posted 2003-09-30 05:44 PM

loved this much

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