Open Poetry #29 |
Bright And Shining Son |
n2dmystic Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 253beyond the doors of perception |
I wrote this the day after finding out that my 24 year old son had testicular cancer. There is nothing quite like cancer to get a familie's attention. My son is fine, though he is a "swinging single." ;-} Born beautiful, bright, and curly, solid as a rock Coming from strong, and handsome family stock As a child; young and beautiful - to live forever Your smile makes dad's heart light as a feather As growth and manhood beckon, you step lightly towards your age Seeking, knowing, and enlightening, becoming as a sage LQQking in, lQQking out, never averting your eyes As a mere young buck, life demands you be wise You know, from your heart, to live is to love On this path of life, you believe to seek above To know, to see, to be, to become That safe place where child finds home Joseph favored of his father Joey adored by his mother Beautiful, strong, steady and bright With love and laughter you bring light To life, to family, to friends, to wife With the birthing of Faith, you find your life Your Father is proud, you are the greatest of sons Knowing the sun shall not set on this greatest of ones Peace, Joe |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Joe...Glad everything turned out okay. Who said it takes 2 to tango? it seems one will do just fine.Serriously that is a tough crisis to face and sounds like Joseph did just fine coming from strong and handsome family stock as you say. So do we call you grandpa Joe? Enjoyed, thanks for sharing...Paul "To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you" |
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dingusjr Member
since 2003-09-24
Posts 415Missouri |
We never know what problems will come our way. Looks like this turned out ok.. thanks for sharing, Larry |
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n2dmystic Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 253beyond the doors of perception |
my kids have literally saved my hide many times. their love is boundless, and infectious... My son is perfect, and the neat thing for me is that he loves to hang with "pops," as he calls me. thank you again Peace, Joe |
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PouringJewels Member
since 2003-09-18
Posts 158Maryland |
Had to look at your work after your comments on my daughters poem Sunshinemc. I have seen and nursed enough cancer for 2 lifetimes. God bless you and your son. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggsssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, I am so happy hat everything turned out okay as your love for your children is soooooo strong and your son and kids will always love you! (smiles) Children truly do teach us too, yay, I love this, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Joseph, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth I can see the sun set and I perceive ***Live*** [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (10-02-2003 05:54 PM).] |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
You are a strong family that will stay united.An awesome bond that all families should share. Crystal |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
I loved reading this. I have sons, too, and this was dear words. You are a proud poppa, and that is a lovely thing. Mine are my life so I know from where you speak in your heart!!!! Love, Terri~ Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer! |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
whew, what a relief that you were spared the heartbreak of separation...no parent should be forced to lose their child. Thank goodness, and a wonderfully composed write. Thank you! |
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n2dmystic Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 253beyond the doors of perception |
again, thank you all for your kind comments. I single parented my three while going to college, working, all that, and they were going through hormonal rage. They made me what I am. They are my very soul... but mostly folks, thank you for your concern Peace, Joe |
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