Open Poetry #29 |
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Endowment |
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wordwizard Member
since 2003-09-08
Posts 483on the way to next world |
so man created from the dust... in America he'd often trust in a famous garden he'd flourish symbolic trees surrounded to nourish it was all from a piece of flesh world's progeny would lay enmeshed procreate and spread the seed thrust of motion to meet the need in America we'd often trust as the loser bites the dust... and the victor's gene succeeds to perform more flagrant deeds © Copyright 2003 ecrivan [This message has been edited by wordwizard (09-30-2003 12:27 AM).] |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
nice read,,,, |
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wordwizard Member
since 2003-09-08
Posts 483on the way to next world |
pleasure you enjoyed ![]() |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
where have you been Martin? a name change... hmmm ![]() M |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Almost a triolet... where's Ethel? ![]() I know she'd like this one... Well done, Sir. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Martin? Is that you? Love this piece..well done! ~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~ ~Autumn, the year's last, loveliest smile~ |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() (sigh) Hey Martin, it is wonderful to see you again, dearest friend, I just noticed your new screenname and hope to read more of your poetry soon, yay! (big hugggssssss) The whole proverb placed on America has ecome outdated sadly and it is ironic to me how it is a small world after all yet the truth is too big to share, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Martin, thank you for sharing! ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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garysgirl![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Hi Martin. Karilea is right...I really do like this. And, it is almost like a triolet. I like the way your wisdom is written into it, too. ![]() Hugs ![]() Ethel |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
Your wisdom is very insightful.This was great. ![]() Crystal |
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