Open Poetry #29 |
Mystic thought a duet by Kethry and Marsha |
Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Mystic thought a duet by Kethry and Marsha Our lives are so brief, a flicker of time But if we're lucky our time's sublime We wade through an ocean of hope's dream Dressing our lives with wonder unseen If we lift our eyes from the dark and drear We will learn what we have to fear Too often that which burdens our soul Buries our lives in a deep dark hole our lives are so brief and none of us know when it will be over or where we will go we wish through each day in a dream of sublime and pray we will have just a little more time although much too often we're buried in mire it doesn't take much to lift our sight higher our burdens condemn us but help us to grow and thus it is always and will ever be so Our thoughts are our own to help us grow But too often we deny what we need to know We nail our feet to the road we walk And deafen our souls with senseless talk But if we heed the silence we will see That hope lies within each act of charity Gifting our hearts with love's true light In heeding its touch we can shine bright in shining brightly our feet float on air in caring for others these lessons we share our thoughts are our own and enclosed in this shell we rise up to heaven or go down to hell sit still in the silence, till all is revealed and we shall discover that we can be healed we prosper this moment and hold onto time grasping and hoping to gain life divine Our souls seek release from sorrow's pain But sometimes we seem to welcome its reign It's as if we don't realise who we are Or that within our souls there shines a star We dim our light and lose our way We shut our eyes and then seem to say I give in, I cede, its too hard to do Then wonder when we can't get through our souls seek release through things we all do while wishing and hoping that we will be true we hear of this calling yet stay in the mire striving to rise up but held by desire while we are inspired by what's good and what's true and yet we're confounded by all things made new we look to the stars to seek what's within and always we're waiting to redo our sin Our lives are just wisps of time you see But if we trust in hope we'll have eternity eternity's ours we're promised this much if it is unsullied by our human touch Marsha and Keth Tomorrow is another day I don't know what it holds |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Marsha and Keth: the two of you walk in the light . . . this is beautiful: We nail our feet to the road we walk And deafen our souls with senseless talk But if we heed the silence we will see so very true and a lovely resounding choir of angels *smile* xxoo |
Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Timeless "mystic thoughts" written by two beautiful and collaborative hearts. Thank you for this gift. Love, Light & the Eternal Spirit, & EA [This message has been edited by Earth Angel (09-30-2003 03:03 AM).] |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
our thoughts are our own and enclosed in this shell we rise up to heaven or go down to hell sit still in the silence, till all is revealed and we shall discover that we can be healed ~*~ Smiling at the both of you... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marsha and Keth Well done, really enjoyed the read. |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Wonderful!!!!!!! You two got it perfect |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
This is a poem to be read over and over. Wonderful work Keth and Marsha. Maree fate is not just |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Marsha & Kethry, you two make the perfect poetic pair! This was simply beautiful and full of so much wisdom! You've left me speechless. take care. Love ya. Amy "love is like a butterfly-- |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful work you two! So very much enjoyed the read. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I always know I'm in for a treat when I see the two of you collaborating... entwined souls make for a seamless write. *S* This is excellent, my friends. *S* |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
shared good thoughts the two of you... hugsss M |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
You girls do this sort of thing well. I enjoyed it. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Awesome! "A spring shower was cause to run |
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