Open Poetry #29 |
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Since I Left You |
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Kaoru![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow ![]() |
Oh, you.. You I'd forgotten about. The things you've owed me, I have let slip my mind. I suppose it's the same on your end.. You've brought out your cards again.. But you, have you found what you've been searching for? The warmth of a body on sunday morning, kissing your eyelids as you sleep? Have you found this true love as it's found me? It's funny how, time progresses in an even, scenic, "in limbo" drive. That no longer do I care for my material belongings as I have found a reason to breathe. I apologize, again, for existing at all.. My mind will stumble along the way as it has done for an eternity, already. I feel sorry for ever letting myself hold such a place in your pre-battered heart.. You've treated me all the same.. And such is life, a habitual need to pass along the hurt we've felt in the past. Such is life to want another horribly written chapter in this drawl of a book. So you never speak to me anymore.. though you know I'm here. And I assume, that you suppose, I'm angry at that. Tis not my fault, you are mostly incorrect, that I've got a hurricane of un-need for you.. For in his bed I've slept..more soundly, and comfortably.. than your stretch of highway bones could ever pillow.. Acessing a molten sky, you you will find out soon.. that moving on, that's what I do.. since I left you. |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
you...are my tears...i cry...h |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
good expressions presented,,, |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
"I feel sorry for ever letting myself hold such a place in your pre-battered heart.. You've treated me all the same.. And such is life, a habitual need to pass along the hurt we've felt in the past." You continue to amaze me! Susan |
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bsquirrel![]()
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
God yes. |
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Wind![]()
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
uuhhh....she's killing me too And the angel said unto me, "These are the cries of the carrots, the cries of the carrots!" |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
moving on...yeah you know I can relate too well to this ![]() |
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Cpat Hair![]()
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Your words blend the understanding of the feelings once there, now, denied, and the vitriolic taste of swallowing once more the thoughts.. not bitter in your presentation exactly, but caustic in the scrape fo the time against now and abraded in the terms you use to describe.. a tender moment of kissing eyelids says it all as to what is gone... you write exceedingly well... and far above the talent levels of most, myself included... always a pleasure to read you... and as I have told Gemma... good thing I am an old fart, or you two would drive me nuts... wanting more. |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
oh this aches but beautifully so |
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vandana![]()
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
liked this much ![]() |
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eor Senior Member
since 2002-09-26
Posts 959blues & greys |
ah my queen you did it again "For those who understand you, no explanation is necessary. For those who don't, none is possible." |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
What else can you do...and eloquently...James |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() (big hugggsssssss) And wen the skies are molten, nothing has really disappeared, just changed and when change is imminent, so is motion and accepting it is one big step to finding that something in return! (sigh) You write with pure heart, sweet friend, I really admire your ponderings, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Meghan, than you for sharing! ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
Whoooooooooooooooooooo yeah! oh this bites on the heels, aches bones, and also gives new life to me. I adore your writes. |
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