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James_A_Fraser
Senior Member

since 2003-09-03

Posts 972
Out Making Anticlines

0 posted 2003-09-29 02:15 AM

I try

stumble

rise
to
seek
words

a word
for you

stumbling
but I

must give
you
words

stumbling
words

a word

somehow
it is
there

your
answer
only

a sigh

n2dmystic
Member

since 2003-09-27

Posts 253
beyond the doors of perception

1 posted 2003-09-29 02:31 AM

sad to have that reaction. sometimes expectations can destroy us, no? very nice write

James_A_Fraser
Senior Member

since 2003-09-03

Posts 972
Out Making Anticlines

2 posted 2003-09-29 06:02 AM

Sometimes a sigh is all a man deserves.

Sometimes it's all he needs.

~~J

Paula Finn
Member Ascendant

since 2000-06-17

Posts 5546
missouri

3 posted 2003-09-29 10:00 AM

Depends on the sigh...

Bonnie j
Senior Member

since 2003-06-27

Posts 1588
Ohio

4 posted 2003-09-29 10:03 AM

The tone of the sigh, a smile, a moment will bring forth many words.
Good one.
See Ya Bon-Bon

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

5 posted 2003-09-29 10:13 AM

"Sometimes a sigh is all a man deserves.

Sometimes it's all he needs."

~ May I use your own words (from one of the replies that you wrote) as my response to your poem of mots?

Love & Light,
Linda

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

6 posted 2003-09-29 10:15 AM

Jamie...This feels very sad.

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

7 posted 2003-09-29 10:16 AM

There are times Jamie..when a sigh can mean oh so much more...
than just a sigh.
Wonderful write.
~Smiles & Monday morning hugs, Nancy~

~ I love your glances meeting mine
across forever or the room ~

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

8 posted 2003-09-29 10:19 AM

I try

stumble

rise
to
seek
words

a word
for you

stumbling
but I

must give
you
words

stumbling
words

a word

somehow
it is
there

your
answer
only

a
[wistful smile
and a]
sigh

~*~

Yes.

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

9 posted 2003-09-29 01:19 PM

sometimes..a sigh is all it takes...h

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

10 posted 2003-09-29 05:23 PM

The very difficulty in finding the words indicates how important finding them is... but sometimes, all that's necessary is caring enough to try. *S*

This does have an element of sadness... but it also reminds me of steadfastness... being there for someone... offering all you can when you don't really know what they need... and that's a thing of beauty. *S*

This sigh is one of admiration. *S*

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

11 posted 2003-09-29 05:38 PM

I'm with Paula Finn... depends on the sigh.

Great work as always James.

Maree

fate is not just
whose cooking smells good
but which way the wind blows

(Ani DiFranco)

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