»
Archives
»
Open Poetry #29
»
Slipping On A Cupid's Shoelace (Duet With Suetang)
| Open Poetry #29 |
|
Slipping On A Cupid's Shoelace (Duet With Suetang) |
|
Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(This is a duet we wrote together! Sue, thank you so much for writing with me, you write with all dear heart as you are a special friend to everyone!  ) Slipping On A Cupid's Shoelace By: Suetang and Mistletoe Angel 9/27/03 Dear sweet sunshine of mine Let me tell you how shiny you are With you, it feels like floating on cloud nine As we look out together, sharing this same shooting star My heart has never known A love so warm and true I found out love’s true meaning On the day that I met you I knew all along it was love at first sight Slipping on a cupid's shoelace Seeing your pair of sparkling eyes Feeling the innocent ivory of your face You’ve filled an empty void My heart now overflows with love We were meant to be together For we fit like hand in glove Unworthy it is for me to say exactly How much my love for you is real So instead I will hold your hand lovingly And everyday feel how you want to feel I look at you and I’m in heaven And now my heart beats for two From deep within my soul I’m sending all my love to you When once everything seemed impossible Your love showed me a whole new Eden You make me feel graceful and special You will always be my seventh heaven Your love shines like a diamond You are the jewel in my crown How very blessed am I To have your love around  I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth I can see the sun set and I perceive ***Live*** [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (09-28-2003 06:37 PM).] |
||
| © Copyright 2003 Nadia Lockheart - All Rights Reserved | |||
|
Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Noah & Suetang - You have written to each other with words of tenderness, well done you two... BC |
||
|
Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
WOW!! Two of Passions finest at their very best! You du-et very well! Bravo! ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~
|
||
|
Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Noah It was such a privilege to write with you and I am honoured that you chose me to do a duet with you. You have done a marvellous job in bringing our words to life. Take care........Sue I am in motion |
||
|
BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
It's not the jewel, it's the crown! Oh sigh, makes me miss mine!  How beautiful is this!!!! Nice duetting you two~ |
||
|
QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
just beautiful!!!!!!! |
||
|
vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice duet  |
||
|
SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
So pretty!! Love, Shara~  Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer! |
||
garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Noah and Sue, this is so beautiful. I totally enjoyed this. Thanks, you two. And, I'm saving this!!!  Hugs  Ethel |
||
|
littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Noah and Sue: beauty indeed and look! and angel for me! (I took it) *smile* from two of the most heartfelt poets here . . . a gift xxoo |
||
|
Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
A beautiful joining! Eric |
||
|
Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Well done, both of you! |
||
|
NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Sue and Noah, you make beautiful and sweet words together. I enjoyed this so much and hope you will grace us with another one at some point in time. Hugs to you both, Marti Hear Blessings dropping their blossoms all around you. |
||
|
Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
On behalf of Noah and myself I just wanted to thank you all for your lovely words and I'm so glad you enjoyed our collaboration. Take care......Sue I am in motion |
||
|
Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
That's harmony .... melodies springing from the heart. Enjoyed this greatly. Thank you Sue and Noah. Love and hugs. Margherita |
||
|
Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Sue and Noah, you both slipped such beautiful images in between the layers of your heartfelt words! What loving sensations you’ve captured! Wonderfully Written! “How very blessed am I To have your love around” That says it all, from us, to you two! Richy |
||
|
Marty Baird Member
since 2003-09-20
Posts 90Georgia, U.S. |
enjoyable read |
||
|
Magicmystery Senior Member
since 2002-02-13
Posts 821Windsor, Ontario, Canada |
You two sing perfect harmony to this poet's ear. I love your blended talents. What an exquisite piece of writing! Sherry |
||
|
Katherine Chandler Member
since 2001-03-07
Posts 280Florida, USA |
What a lovely collaboration ladies, simply beautiful how your words blended so perfectly. Peace and love, Kate "At this point in my life I'd like |
||
|
Thomas119gold Senior Member
since 2002-06-03
Posts 708Biloxi, MS (city by the sea) |
I must agree with all who wrote replies before me.  |
||
|
Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Two romantic souls singing a song of love to the heart of each reader. & Linda P.S. That is a wonderful picture of the two of you! tehe  |
||
|
Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Sue: Thanks for sending me this link. I'm sorry it's taken so long to reply, but with the site problems, I haven't been able to until now. This is lovely and both you and Noah have done a great job. Very romantic and touching. Love Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
||
|
dertah Senior Member
since 2003-06-18
Posts 584 |
good write. but oh how words are meaningless if they do not speak the truth. |
||
|
Alwye
Moderator
Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
aww, this is so lovely and sweet you guys! Beautiful work, I enjoyed reading. *Krista Knutson* |
||
|
James_A_Fraser Senior Member
since 2003-09-03
Posts 972Out Making Anticlines |
Classic interplay -- beautifully done! |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||
