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with or without you (meg's challenge)
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with or without you (meg's challenge) |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space 
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cursed and perfect we blurred lines between the gravity of lyrics heightened with every meeting and every parting still i love still i hate you deeply |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
crys....thats my favorite song. you scare me boy And the angel said unto me, "These are the cries of the carrots, the cries of the carrots!" |
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n2dmystic Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 253beyond the doors of perception |
yes I know, tenderly hating her guts. Nicely done Peace, Joe |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
you took your picture down...oh I see how it is  and..yanno I want to get rid of mine hehAnd the angel said unto me, "These are the cries of the carrots, the cries of the carrots!" |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Love is such a big emotion, that it can include both love and hate, and still be love. Ironic. Enjoyed this! |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Liz I scare you? That's why i took my picture down..grins exactly Joe..tenderly hating perfect words Liz i say you paint your face green and roll your eyes in the new pic lol It is ironic Martie it really is a fine line between such powerful emotions |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
All my current pictures have one or both eyes closed. lol And the angel said unto me, "These are the cries of the carrots, the cries of the carrots!" |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
funny that's the only way i can look at mine |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
you need no pic...i see inside you...smooch...helen |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (big hugggssssss) You have just said what my second favorite song ever is, dearest friend, it is absolutely beautiful because though the harmony is light and smooth, there is a whole catharsis of emotion flooding the song, both through the wailing riff and Bono's honeyed vocals that make every true rock and roll fan cry! (wipes tears) This is beautiful, sweet friend, U2 is legendary, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Raphael, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
did you see the liv bugs thread? we are missing you in there. cmon raphael i can't live with or without you And the angel said unto me, "These are the cries of the carrots, the cries of the carrots!" |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Quite a deed. Abbracci. Margherita  |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
love to hate them. you said it. Susan |
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Ringo
since 2003-02-20
Posts 3684Saluting with misty eyes |
Raph- Definate U2... This write makes the song that much more enjoyable. We are all equal but we’re individually different |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Aenimal - I find it amazing how that works and seems to go together... BC |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You scare wind. I know that's not easy, so this poem must be given an A for awesome. I don't know the lyrics or the song but it has impact all its own. |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
he scares me because he's like my evil twin. and sunshine you MUST hear that song. it is the best song in the world and I am not kidding  And the angel said unto me, "These are the cries of the carrots, the cries of the carrots!" |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
I have sometimes thought it is required, to hate some one we love. Well written Sir Poet. |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
still i love still i hate you deeply oh you have captured my mood today exactly. its crazy to think you truly can feel this kind of limbo towards someone. you know, i don't really like the song. it reminds me of the cheesy scene from friends where ross and rachel are splitting up. it's playing in the background. every time i can see ross's pathetic puppy dog face and the rain outside rachels window. and i don't even watch friends that much, so this is not fair! ~I wanna live, I wanna give, I've been a miner for a heart of gold~ Neil Young |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
YES! Raph, you rock!  |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Raph: you have captured this very emotion perfectly and have given great homage to a beautiful song xxoo |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
smooches h, thanks thanks Noah yer the greatest i'll be there Liz, i'm a drummer we're lazy grins Grazie Margherita thanks Susan Ringo thats a great compliment thank you Bill thank you for the kind words Karilea thank you lyrics are on the way Liz thanks you better thank god(facsmile) that we're not identical. and vice versa ice never seen it gem but i couldnt listen to this song for a good 5 years thanks for the challenge Meg needed a boost thanks Sue as always |
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Jason Lyle Senior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438With my darkling |
Challenge well met, what could I add? Jason |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Raph..this is incredible. That song wrenches my gut every time I hear it. Your poem did the same thing.... |
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