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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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Over Looked slipping through my world you think I am so cluttered filling all the spaces too full I do color outside the lines but all you see are the flaws you are missing the best parts of me "I am living a life, i have no wish to live. How did this happen?" Unknown |
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alisa Member
since 2003-08-20
Posts 70Florida |
WOW!!!! lady, this is great...  |
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Marty Baird Member
since 2003-09-20
Posts 90Georgia, U.S. |
Nice |
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n2dmystic Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 253beyond the doors of perception |
truly wonderful. Outside the lines is freedom. good good write Peace, Joe |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
WOW..I heard that all the way here in Texas. Amazing how words take flight, and cross emotional lines...you know how boundries are invisible lines, and I'm glad this one crossed over the boundry lines and I found them. Says so much. Flaws are only a part..they aren't the sum of who we are.  Loved this. Shara~ Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer! |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
it's funner outside the lines |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Helen, some people are always looking for what they think is wrong with someone...never trying to see the perfect things. Most of the time, the things those people think are wrong...aren't.... just different!!  Hugs, Lady  Ethel |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) Oh Helen, I know just how you feel, sweet friend, or people always focus on celebrities and their wealth, riches, and relationships more than their own loved ones ever so much, then hey look at their loved ones and say, "Why aren't you like them?" (sad sigh) It's always outside the lines where the beauty is, God Bless You, I love this, we value most of all the beauty in everyone here at Passions, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Que sera is a hard act to follow, but you always manage to be one up on her! Nice writing slick one~ |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Helen, you have put into words, what I have been thinking. |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
We create the lines, so we are the lines....and coloring only within the lines is narcissism. Reach Out And Color Someone! ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
Great! The best pictures are outside the lines. |
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dingusjr Member
since 2003-09-24
Posts 415Missouri |
What a fool he is.....missing the best parts of you! Larry |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
what a shame, indeed |
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