Open Poetry #29 |
The Old Brass Bell |
Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
I wish to touch that old brass bell upon the ridge, the church on high I wish to ring, to hear the knell upon the let my last soul’s sigh. For from this ring, this solemn ring a tear shall come and wash a cheek. And from on high an angel sings a song so soft yet strong not meek. I wish to hear the lasting gong before my eyes are darkened sleep To sing and hum that long lost song where rivers run both clear and deep. And on the stone of granite grey few words will scribe of my request. For from that bell, the ring will say I lived for love, and now I rest. |
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n2dmystic Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 253beyond the doors of perception |
beautiful Magnus. kinda like Frost's "I had a lover's quarrel with the world." thank you Peace, Joe |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
beautiful piece of poetry Barry! |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
But? that's not for a long time, right? No way. Don't talk about that now. Not now. Shara~ Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer! |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Very beautiful words, that touch the heart, dear Magnus. Love, Margherita |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Barry....This is so Poignant..so well done! |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) I believe at least once in our lives we need to ring that bell and proclaim to the world all the loe we've been blessed with and salutate them with a warm round of applause! (big hugggssssss) Let us keep ringing that bell, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Well shoot, Magnus. Outside my office door is a large church, with a very large bell, which sounds on the hour. At noon...it sounds for five minutes. I'm going to have to think now, every time I hear it.... is this the time!? Dang it... don't DO this to me!!! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Excellent write m'friend! ~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Barry - what else to live for but love my friend... BC |
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